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Phenomenon Chapter 3 (lol, that was sooner than I thought)

Dec 19, 2011 21:48

Title : Phenomenon

Chapter : Three

Summary : When someone thinks that it can't get any worse than this, fate has a funny way of of telling you, oh yes it can.

Warnings : Torture

Series : AU Bayverse, early in the war...
( Give Jazz a cookie :3 )

prowlxjazz, prowl, tf-human, story : phenomenon, jazz

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lobaeclipse December 20 2011, 02:05:33 UTC

Yay, more of this fic! I'm glad you didn't gloss over those pesky details like food and temperature and oxygen and waste. It really emphasizes how much Jazz is out of his element (and how adaptable he is).

That bit about Jazz cleaning Prowl's armor was sweet, and it gave me the weirdest mental image of a remora grooming a shark. o.O

pjlover666 December 20 2011, 06:40:51 UTC

Remora grooming a shark...Hahah I pictures a chevroned shark with a sweet, cute little remora swimming next to it! >3

Yeah, I try and make this fic as realistic as possible (from human perspective). I'm glad you like it! Thanks! ^^

lobaeclipse December 21 2011, 04:40:03 UTC

Oh, Primus. Now I kinda want to draw it . . .

pjlover666 December 21 2011, 09:16:08 UTC

I *twitch* must *twitch* SEE IT! *falls over laughing*

lobaeclipse December 23 2011, 05:18:36 UTC

This is all your fault.

pjlover666 December 23 2011, 08:02:51 UTC

Hahaha >3 Awww now that is just adorable! Haha, I love their designs! And their expressions - haha now that is so Jazz (who's like: Yo, Prowler, lets go for a swim!) And Prowls expression...omg, now that is just priceless (Prowl : -.-')
You should post it on p/j comm. or somewhere - it's priceless :D

Now that's an awesome pic. Thanks -- I just woke up and this made me smile really hard. :)

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