My Sweet Valentine

[pjlover666]

Name: My Sweet Valentine
One-shot
Words: ~1, 700
Verse: G1
Genre: Fluff, fluff and more fluff
Rating: K
Characters: Prowl, Jazz, mentions of others
Warnings: None
Summary: A simple and normal Valentine's Day for Prowl and Jazz.
AN: Hope you like it ^^ R&R

Comments

[anothersquirrel]

That was really sweet. But I saw two problems, you kept switching back and forth between past and present tense, and you put 'thickets' where you probably meant 'tickets'.

I'm actually kind of surprised that Prime stopped Prowl on his way back to his quarters on Valentine's. You'd think that he'd have an idea that Jazz would have had something planned, and to not get in the way. :)

[pjlover666]

Thanks, I'm glad you liked it!
It's spelled "tickets"? *facepalm* Sorry! I'm correct it right away! But I wont be able to fix the past and present tense. I've noticed that it sounded off (I mix them quite often) I still have a long way to go in learning this language :D
Prime?...Uh, yeah. I wasn't sure who to put in there. If it were someone else Prowl would have refused, but he never refuses Prime...
Thank you again and feel free to point out more mistakes! ^^
*goes to google dictionary to see what thickets mean*

Awwww

[crnkysnapdragon]

I agree Jazz knows Prowl :)

Re: Awwww

[pjlover666]

He sure does! ^^ Thanks for reviewing :)

[renegadewriter8]

Wooo go Jazz he knew all along that Prowl was probably going to be busy hehe that's what knowing your partner is all about ^^

[pjlover666]

Hehe, that's our Jazz! He's not Head of Spec Ops for nothing =D Thanks for reviewing.

[bluetaelon]

Awww... This was sweet:)

[pjlover666]

Thank you very much =)

[fianna9]

sweet and sappy. I really like how they both worked to make the holiday special.

[pjlover666]

Thank you :)