Beneath the Beauty -1/?- KaixKazuki

[piyokolove]

Title: Beneath the Beauty
Author: piyokolove 
Genre: Angst, Drama, Fluff [maybe] ,Romance
Bands/Pairings: The GazettE, ScreW; Kai/Kazuki, slight Aoi/Uruha.. others to come
Disclaimer: I don't own them.. PSC does.. lucky bastards >__<
Chapters: 1/?
Warnings: Het? MxM, Unbeta'd
Rating: PG [for now as well]
Summary: Kai is still down over his recent break-

Comments

[piyokolove]

Haha a cross dressed Kazuki would be rather convincing :D
and I'm working on the next chapter now.. Just gotta get past a big obstacle :P
Thanks for reading though <3

[stoic_harlequin]

YAY!!

I was one day away from *poking* you to remind you that it was well passed Friday; but in a good spirited fashion because...I have been looking forward to this story. Naturally you did not disappoint and let me stand by my traditional manner of reviewing. The quote of my favored lines...

I had one in this piece I found quite potent.

He felt his cock twitch within the restraints of his jeans as he imagined her soft lips ghosting over his skin like cool satin, sending shivers down his spine and electrifying him all at the same time.

Lovely, lovely, lovely!! You have a special way of pulling words together and making very beautiful sentences. You always impress me with your flow - it so amazing to read. It's not dry and flavorless. Your writing and style are so flavorful.

You do not disappoint. I much love the description of 'her' - how she looks, how her clothes hold to her, the curves and such. You write very well. Amazing job. I do hope you will update soon. Please. ^_^

[piyokolove]

Yeah, it took a long time for me to get around to typing this chapter up because to be honest I lost a lot of will. I still want to write it, and small scenes keep popping up in my head, I just have to get over the initial meeting, because that's what's messing me up the most. I hope I can regain interest.. I know I can :D

Thank you for complimenting my writing so much. You make me very happy whenever you comment and I like that. I like to put a lot of descriptions in my writing, and in this fic I hope to add more details than ever because I want to be able to pull the reader into the world I'm writing about.

I'm working on the second chapter now, and I hope to have it up before the weekend is up, or atleast that is my plan. You'll just have to bear with me in the next chapter because it's hard to write about a very straight Kai finding out that his dream "girl" is infact a guy.. oh difficulties difficulties >.<

Ano, I shall push through! Thank you for reading and be an awesome commentor like usual <3

[piyokolove]

If Kazuki dressed right and added some fake boobs he'd make an awesome girl, but I think I enjoy him more as a guy xD
Haha I plan on having the rest of the GazettE be the comic relief throught the entire story, it'll help distract from my angsty main couple. Plus the rest of ScreW are scheduled to make a few appearances :D so that should be fun.

-poked;nibbles- and see how it goes you shall!! -writes-