Comments | pixieblues: fic: screaming

pixieblues

fic: screaming

Aug 16, 2010 16:55

Title: screaming
Rating: NC-17
Genre(s): porn
Word Count: ~745
Pairing(s) / Character(s): Arthur / Merlin (Arthur / Morgause)
Warnings / Spoilers: Slight dub-con possibly
Disclaimer: I do not own Merlin.
Summary: Arthur thinks he has Merlin at last. Written for Challenge 6 of the summerpornathon.

( “You want to fuck me, don’t you?” )

character: arthur pendragon, fic, fandom: merlin, character: merlin, rating: nc-17, challenge: summerpornathon, pairing: arthur/merlin, genre: porn

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pixieblues August 19 2010, 10:05:21 UTC

xD Indeed! Thank you very much!

hermitknut August 16 2010, 21:22:38 UTC

I melted completely, then I froze at the ending! I think that means I should have shattered, right? *shakes head* I can't remember my chemistry lessons :)
This is powerful, heady stuff. Wonderful work, the twist really got me :D
HK

pixieblues August 19 2010, 10:05:49 UTC

PLEASE DON'T SHATTER. DEFY CHEMICAL THEORY. xD

Thank you very much for reading and enjoying it! :D

flwrpwr_vampyre August 17 2010, 01:30:27 UTC

I also didn't really read the pairings and so was like O.O 'Who is that?' at the end. Absolutely delicious and well done!

pixieblues August 19 2010, 10:06:25 UTC

Ahaha, yeah, it's not obvious it's Morgause. Thanks very much!

quarterwhore August 17 2010, 02:18:08 UTC

my thought process:

HOTHOTHOTHOTOMFGSOHOT-- wait, what just happened?

No really, can someone explain what just happened? I think my mind got fucked.

pixieblues August 19 2010, 10:07:48 UTC

LOL YOUR COMMENT AMUSES ME GREATLY.

TO EXPLAIN:

1. ARTHUR FUCKS MERLIN.
2. MERLIN TURNS OUT TO BE MORGAUSE.
3. MERLIN HAS IN FACT BEEN UNDER THE BED ALL THIS TIME, CAPTURED BY MORGAUSE TEH BIATCH.

COMPRENDEZ, Y/Y?

<3

quarterwhore August 19 2010, 10:43:05 UTC

I got the basic idea of it, but I can't figure out what happens next... As horrifying as this conclusion was, what really fucks my head over is thinking about the aftermath, and it seems like every single possibility I think of is heartbreaking! T.T

Honestly, I'm not sure what would be more horrifying:

1. if Morgause leaves and Arthur expects constant sexytiems from real!Merlin now, or thinks Merlin is roleplaying when he acts terrified..
or
2. real!Merlin keeping up the act because he doesn't know how to explain it (or wants to spare Arthur's feelings, like he did with lying to Arthur about his mother), or thinks that's what Arthur wants/needs/likes,
or
3. real!Merlin trapped underneath Arthur's bed until someone finds him or something, and is stuck listening every night until Morgause is tired of being him, hearing them talk and fuck, wondering if Arthur prefers that version of Merlin over real!Merlin ( ... )

pixieblues August 22 2010, 15:32:27 UTC

Oh bb, you've obviously put a lot of thought into it, it makes my heart all warm and fuzzy! <333 Thank you so much!

For your wonderfulness, I'll write a sequel just for you! *squishes* Don't expect it any time soon, though - I've got such a backlog of fics to write! Dx

chrisastopholis August 17 2010, 05:24:38 UTC

GUH! This was so hot! I have such a weakness for dirty talk of the "you slut!" variety.
I'm with quarterwhore on this one. This was kind of a sensory overload of a sex scene in the best possible way.

pixieblues August 19 2010, 10:08:18 UTC

Glad you liked the porn, my dear. Thank you very much!