Bandom Big Bang 2/4
It’s never possible for all of them to have lunch together, which Pete moans about, but Patrick is secretly quite grateful for. He’s not sure he could handle the blatant Ryan-worship from Pete and Brendon, and the obvious ignoring of said worship by Ryan, and after hearing about Jon and Spencer’s courting dance, he’s not sure he could handle that ( Read more... )
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I think I am warming to Brendon the most (though he's naughty for telling a student she's his favourite! Tsk! But realistically fallible traits like that make a character real). This is probably because he makes me laugh the most and I'm a giggle-addict.
Tease with the almost-sex scene though! I was all liek woo teh hawt!!11!! And then it ended. Woe. :( On the other hand, I really appreciate the charater detail and realistic progression you are putting into the various relationships.
There's a few missing words (I didn't make notes as I went, sorry) and the Under the Sea section? SO should've been described. Though I understand if time ran out. You could've made that hilariously gorgeous.
"Nobody doesn’t love puppies!"
I LOL'd!
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I'll consider developing the Under the Sea part as a coda, but no promises!
Thanks for the section by section feedback! <3
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