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Fic: In the Shadows- (ficlet)

Nov 30, 2009 22:10

Title: In the Shadows
Author: Pixelmayhem
Summary: McCoy has been noticing some extra attention lately.
Rating: PG for some cussing
Warnings: girl-Kirk. Possibley triggery content. Highlight to view. Stalkers and allusions to possible previous assault
Word count: 571
Pairings: pre-girl!Kirk/McCoy
Notes/Disclaimer: I don’t own them. I just ( Read more... )

girl!kirk, snippets, academy days, fic, angst, kirk/mccoy, stxi, pg

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theshiva December 1 2009, 05:36:56 UTC

test test test

Will give you this:

test test test

:)

pixelmayhem December 1 2009, 05:45:07 UTC

AWESOME!! Thank you so much!

theshiva December 1 2009, 05:51:40 UTC

No problem! Also I just finished reading the little ficlet, and I've never read a gender-bend before so a part of me is all o_O (not that that's a bad thing) but I really liked it!

(Oh McCoy!)

pixelmayhem December 1 2009, 06:02:36 UTC

Yay! I'm glad you liked it. I know gender-bent stories are an aquired taste so I love it when people tell me they have read and enjoyed one.

Oh McCoy for sure! *huggles him*

zephtastic December 1 2009, 05:37:26 UTC

I liked this rather a lot, actually. It kind of sucks that this is as far as you can go but... I know the feeling. Sometimes I'm struck by plots and as far as I can get is just a very lengthy summary of what I would write.

pixelmayhem December 1 2009, 05:48:47 UTC

Yay! It just popped into my head today while I was driving. It might go farther one day, but right now I just can't think of the next step. :/

as far as I can get is just a very lengthy summary of what I would write

*flails* I'm glad I'm not the only one. Haha.

zephtastic December 1 2009, 06:34:10 UTC

I usually get mine in bed (or in the shower) and all the right words come right then, when I have no where to write them down. When I try for it later I can't remember what I wanted to stay and just get frustrated. Buuhh. Like this really distressing deathfic I got the yesterday in bed, which sounded so great when I first thought it through and then when I hopped up to type it all out (and not get any sleep) it seemed like trash. I've been picking at it ever since, wondering wtf I wanted to do with it.

You are definitely not the only one. I have half fics written with the scene that started the whole shebang and the rest is written in parenthesis like "then they go to the barn and Jim says 'you're so awesome' and Bones says 'well, duh, I already knew that' and sex or something happens. Maybe I dunno." It's pretty failtastic. This is also how I write notes for fics I actually am going to finish, lol. My fics when they first start are such a mess.

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pixelmayhem December 1 2009, 05:53:47 UTC

:D Where it'll take me indeed. It grabbed me by the neck today and shook me until I wrote it and then it stopped and said "nah, that's all right for now."

I may take you up on that. ;D But after I get the next one out before it strangles me. It's all wind, and passion, and adrenaline and I'm not sure I can do it justice. But it's insisting. Plot tribbles...bah.

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pixelmayhem December 2 2009, 03:44:54 UTC

Sometimes I see others fics where it's just small scenes strung together and it makes me giggle cause I figure they had the same problem and just left it that way.

Yes! It's coming along. I can't wait for brainstorming.

You know me! I totally wouldn't mind listening to you about your tribbles.

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