Untitled #10 (Gen, PG-13)

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Title: Untitled #10
Rating: PG-13
Category: Gen oneshot
Word Count: 3618
Characters: Sam, Dean, OC
Spoilers: Nothing specific
Summary: There was more to Sam's gift than having the occasional vision.
Warnings: None
Author’s Notes: Originally written April 22, 2007. Placed mid-season two as far as timeframe goes (in other words, before they kill the

Comments

[ongiara]

I really love the pace in this and how you structured it. Starting with the prophecy and coming full circle at the end. And the somewhat open ending works so great here; leaves so much room for speculation and just leaves you thinking this through all over again. Nice work!

[pixel_0]

Like I was saying to some people up there *nods to above comments*, the ending gave me a bit of trouble because I wasn't sure how vague I wanted it to be--if at all--do I show the demons dying? Do I show the aftermath? I'm glad it worked for you! :)

Thank you! :D

[layne67]

Very nicely done. Love the slow built-up, from the prophecy right up to the explosive ending. My heart caught a bit when they were at the gas station and Sam peeled off his gloves. I thought there was going to be an accident. Phew!

*loves*

[pixel_0]

Haha, I didn't even think about that! *facepalm* Good thing I didn't let Dean have Sam fill up the tank! Holy crap, that would've been bad. :P

Thank you! :)

[legoline]

Queen Of Amazing Twists, I bow to you :-) ♥

[pixel_0]

*squishes* big♥

Thank you! :)