Comments | pitza: Forays, redux

pitza

Forays, redux

Aug 18, 2005 16:47

Title: Maybe, baby (4/?)
Rating: PG-13ish?
Pairing: Nick/Greg (CSI)
Warnings/Spoilers: Hmm... Grave Danger inspired angst. Was part of the ngchallenge's Clothing Challenge.Parts 1 & 2 and Part 3. 'Guided By Voices' provides the soundtrack to this fic: "Hold on Hope".
Summary: The first step into the unknown.

( Waking up is the first thing we do... )

csi

Comments 12

sillie82 August 18 2005, 17:48:26 UTC

Ah, wow... I'm glad Nick finally started talking. Loved this.

pitza August 18 2005, 20:01:25 UTC

Yep. Cuz they're stuck in a hospital room with nowhere else to go. and I suspect they know that the docs aren't going to set them loose until they fess up to each other.

*g*

can't wait for them to get out of there and face the wrath of Grissom for getting shot.

maybe grissom'll shoot them, and they'll recover at home and have hawt!sex. hmmmm... maybe not.

serenity151979 August 18 2005, 18:39:37 UTC

Beautiful! Finally Nick is being honest, not just with Greg, but with himself.
"My life is not mine to give away anymore, 'cause you own half of it." Nick tells him and smiles. And Greg falls in love all over again. Guh! So lovely!

pitza August 18 2005, 20:03:19 UTC

Yep! coz it's high time nick starts to fess up. i think he knows that if he doesn't he'll end up in a loony bin or prolonged sessions with dr. shrink, which'll do wonders to his dignity, i suppose. *hug nick*

and i wonder how many people nick manages to get into his bed with that line? *g*

fred_bear August 18 2005, 22:29:19 UTC

"I told you once, and I'll tell you again. You're the shore I'll always come back to. 'Cause we're destined to be together, forever."

Ah, yes, very lovely. :)

pitza August 18 2005, 22:41:44 UTC

*grin* thank you!

I was worried they're too mushy. but then again, they're without an audience, so they can be as mushily romantic as they want, i suppose....

*g*

rednetra August 19 2005, 06:14:53 UTC

this is a very loveing and lovely story.

pitza August 19 2005, 10:38:41 UTC

*yay* thank you! glad you enjoyed it. i was really worried that it might just be too overdrawn and mushy *g*

thanks for your kind words!

rednetra August 19 2005, 13:10:44 UTC

It is very mushy but with this it works. It is good to see Mushy sometime

pitza August 19 2005, 14:27:16 UTC

*grin* I suppose, since they're alone... there's a... leeway on mushiness *g*

catlover2x August 19 2005, 15:13:33 UTC

Wow, this is just lovely. I love how everyone has such an original and personal take on the relationship. Sorry I haven't read before. I'm horribly behind in my reading and am just going to have to work back. :-)

pitza August 19 2005, 16:26:15 UTC

*g* thank you! I like my Nick and Greg mushy... *g* prolly because my mother used to feed me mushy peas when I was little.

And what a time to come back and read fics. The Great NGChallenge Mod declares this week (and hopefully a few more weeks to come): wank!fic week.

I've never been this happy before.