[B.A.P] October Skies (1/1)

[chiharu]

Title: October Skies
Fandom: B.A.P
Author: chiharu
Characters/pairing: Daehyun/Youngjae
Rating: PG
Wordcount: ~4,300
Summary: TS Entertainment's Jung Daehyun is Yoo Youngjae's biggest rival for this year's Rookie of the Year Award, but that's just half the story. AU! For roebling

Comments

[seulpeo]

THERES SO MUCH HOMEWORK IM SUPPOSED TO BE DOING RIGHT NOW BUT I COULDNT RESIST :'(

oh my godddd chiha jie this is so cute ;_;
youngjaes anxiety about debuting and where he stands with daehyun felt so real the whole time huhuhu. alternate reality fics are always some of my favorites and you did such a good job, even with little details like the other jypent idols and how youngjae was stuck being a backup dancer for 15&. and the way youngjae went and saved daehyun in the supermarket and how they just got along so easily AND DAEHYUNS FLIRTING AND YOUNGJAE AWKWARDLY ASKING HIM STRAIGHT OUT UGH DAEJAE!! AND YOUNGJAE FREAKING OUT ABOUT THE DAEHYUN/HYOSUNG RELATIONSHIP BUT DAEHYUN PUT THINGS RIGHT HUHUHU YES

but Daehyun is probably home by the sea, breathing in the sun. Youngjae wishes he was there too, watching the sunlight bounce off the sand and light up Daehyun’s face. Youngjae gave up on looking away from Daehyun months ago.
crying my favorite line aaaaaa

[chiharu]

HWAIGHTING EMMI-CHAN ;~;

Daehyun is so pretty these days I just can't look away hehehe. Thank you so much for reading~ I'm glad you liked it! <3__<3

[digindeeper]

this is super super super cute. i really really enjoyed this.

[chiharu]

thank you for reading!

[twiggyrocks2815]

The idea of Youngjae being part of JYP was interesting. I love the way he's such close friends with the rookies, and even Taecyeon shows up to support him! That was nice. At first I thought Daehyun and Youngjae were going to be rivals, but they actually had a really sweet relationship. Youngjae saving him in the grocery store was so sweet. It was really great!

[chiharu]

ty for reading!

[almostblue]

LISTEN I KNOW YOU GOT MY DUMB CAPSLOCKY DM'S ABOUT THIS BUT I NEED TO SAY AGAIN HOW MUCH I LOVED THIS STORY, UGH. Even if it was a tough one for you to write, you captured everything so perfectly. It was such a fun, unique take on casting and the idol scene; I could see it happening the entire time in my head ♥ And their understated confession that says everything that needs to be said, and then THE SCANDAL and then Daehyun's helpless confession I just---so many wonderful feels. Thank you so much for writing, bb ♥

[chiharu]

mannn this story really had me stumped because!! I've written so many slice of life fics that I am ACTUALLY OUT OF IDEAS u___u I'm glad the characterizations work out!! ♥ ♥ ♥

[i_luv_tvxq]

*reading in bed*
*flailing like cray*
*squeeeeeeeeeeeeeee*

idk, but you always write such good fluff D: they're just so cute! their little food dates and then discussions about the spiritual meaning of food... (trust daehyun, trust xD)

daehyun and his fail confession on the phone, the touch of angst when jae is all sadbeans and rerecords the ballad (major YAB/ikemen desune feels..!!), and then omg THE ALPACA; you are too precious Jung daehyun ;~;

(and zomg totally unromantic backseat dates. dae, i love your ideas.)

[chiharu]

hehe I'm glad you liked it! the alpaca was just a fun touch b/c my bed is covered with alpaca plushies. thank you for reading!