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[piro_kun]

A funny thing from a MSN convo last night.

I gave this to Lily and Kylie.

See if you could find 2 mistakes from there.(for fun)XD

Me and adaci were planning to see each other, We were susposed to planned it today.

Find 2 mistakes. If you do, you get a cookie/muffin.

Comments

[anonymous]

a) It's a run-on. You should take out the comma after "other," and put a period. Two spaces after it.
b) Capitalize "adaci." It's a proper noun ;x

It took me a while to figure out that "Me and adaci..." was the sentence to look at. XD;

[pwink__dolphin]

GAH. I forgot to login x_x

[anonymous]

Acadi and I?

[jigglypuff]

I'll rectify it as I did yesterday :D +meanie+

Acadi and I were planning to see each other; we were supposed to plan it today.

[Semi-colon there because the thoughts are closely related o_o]