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Disdain

Mar 01, 2013 21:45

Title: Disdain
Rating: PG-13
Pairing/Characters: OnKey, OnTae
Genre: Fiction
Word count: 3,705
Summary: Key didn't know what to do anymore. So he just let it happen.

( ... Maybe a last word would be appropriate. )

key, oneshot, onew, kibum, shinee, onkey, ontae

Comments 9

squire_conrad March 2 2013, 07:02:38 UTC

This was well-written but super painful. I found it very believable how Key got to that place where he couldn't listen to an explanation.

Great job! I hope there is a sequel but I love angst so this is wonderful as a oneshot as well. :)

piplupz March 2 2013, 23:48:17 UTC

Thank you for liking it!

I'm still debating for a sequel or just leaving it to imagination. Who knows. c:

ma_yu_ri March 2 2013, 15:42:44 UTC

My heart broke from reading this.
It's well written, and conveys the pain, omg.
It's wonderful, really wonderful.
I really have no words. Good job. :)

piplupz March 2 2013, 23:49:35 UTC

Thank you for reading and complimenting it.
I'm glad the oneshot did have emotion conveyed. c:

ly_teng March 3 2013, 17:44:21 UTC

It's so heartbreaking..can we have a happy sequel please?

piplupz March 3 2013, 21:09:16 UTC

I probably won't write a sequel (at least immediately) because I'm writing other things atm.
But leave it all up to your imagination if it's happy or not.
I planned that it would be happy, nonetheless.

charmingstar02 March 3 2013, 20:55:41 UTC

I really hope you can make a sequel, 'cause I feel like dying.. I'm not sure why I'm not crying, I'm suffering so much

This is so well-written that I really feel in pain, wish you can continue, and... I don't know quite well how to use LJ, is there a way for me to know if you write a sequel?

piplupz March 3 2013, 21:15:25 UTC

Thank you for reading it. c:

The sequel is still a debate, but if you really want to keep up with me to see my other updates or if the sequel is written, go to my user info link, and the new page should show a track user option. Or you can just keep up with the OnKey community because I always post my writings to the appropriate groups. Just look for my username with the post.

Thank you for taking interest. c:

shineeyukee April 10 2013, 05:57:32 UTC

waaa the story is too sad. i feel sorry for onew... PLEASE do make a sequel i would like to know what will Key's reaction if he knows the truth, or if his feeling for onew is really gone :(

i'll be subscribing to you to know if you have already written the sequel as well read your other fics :)