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axolotl_lan in piper_trickster

Halloween Prompt Fest Submission

Oct 24, 2010 21:52

Title: A Dream of Fall
Rating: NC-17
Summary: The scents and smells of a season that reminds us both warmth and cold.
Word count: 1750
Prompt: Candy Apples

Author Note: Yes it is early, but I will be very busy this week it seems with work/school.

( Like the crunching of leaves beneath his feet )

trickster, axolotl_lan, halloween, pied piper

Comments 4

defying3reason October 25 2010, 18:05:47 UTC

i love james' rambling mental stream, and his odd but also right list of priorities, particularly his critique of piper's shampoo :)

jinx_jesse October 26 2010, 13:15:04 UTC

A tapestry of words, a feast for the senses. Very well done, and sweet. I love the fine blend of uncertainty and certainty.

Looking at your music choice, all I could hear in MY head was "Old Friends" by Everything But The Girl....

ivybramble November 1 2010, 06:59:47 UTC

Huzzah for two of my favourite things - Resurrection and Sexy Times! XD

runenklinge November 3 2010, 22:07:40 UTC

note to self: stop bookmarking sites for commenting later, because I always forget I had something bokmarked. That´s like tying a knot into your handkerchief to remind you of something and then forgetting the whole handkerchief altogether

anyway, awesome fic!

pushing him into a pile of leaves. James giggled at pieces of oak and maple leaf sticking to Piper’s hair.
...I want someone to draw that, that´s a lovely image^^