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Fic: Bad Days

Aug 05, 2008 18:34

Title: Bad Days.
Author: Seftimiu aka Brain Freeze
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: Don't own, don't make money off of it.
Warning: Kinda smoopy, really. /headdesk/ aw well. schmoop has to happen sometime?
Prompt/Challenge: Degenerative Disease! Poor suffering Pipster
Notes: (Yes, I have RA)

( On to the story )

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Comments 9

axolotl_lan August 5 2008, 23:50:21 UTC

Squee I adore this! You did fantastic with this. <3 Oh James Piper will keep you from getting all depressy and sad. This is excellent!

seftimiu August 6 2008, 00:38:51 UTC

XD thank you so much! Because I was seriously like... is this enough? But it felt like enough but I'm so not used to writing such short stories, so I second guess myself on length and depth. So I am so glad to hear you liked it!

Thank you /pets Piper and James/

liabrown August 6 2008, 00:02:51 UTC

Blech, you have RA? My sympathies. When I was 20 I was tested for it, but turns out I just have some kind of ordinary arthritis they can't quite pin down :P

This was nice, very realistic and true to life.

seftimiu August 6 2008, 00:41:16 UTC

Yeahhh started having symptoms when I was a late teenager, and it just gets worse and worse as the years go by. The Yoda line is technically stolen from my husband who compares me to 'Yoda walking in just before he brings out a can of whoop ass' But that is because even though I shuffle around, and can't barely walk some days? I still do most the disciplining of the children and get things done. XD Someday though? I'll get one of those toy light sabres and smack him with it.

But sympathies to you too, because ordinary arthritis even if it can't be pinned down is a pain in the butt to deal with and still literally hurts. :(

Thank you so much.

katzedecimal August 6 2008, 00:40:45 UTC

My mother had RA, too. Not sure which is worse, RA or Lupus. They're both nastybad.

.... oh yeah, good fic *LOL* *remembers we're supposed to be reviewing fics here*

seftimiu August 6 2008, 00:53:07 UTC

XD LOL well, it strikes a cord into people I think. So it is easy to get into thinking/discussing it. /nods/ Yeah, it's pretty much a toss up sometimes between RA and Lupus, but then they are both Autoimmune disorders so it makes sense that they're both nasty bad.

And thank you. XD I was concerned because it was so short (and I'm seriously not used to writing short fics anymore) that I flubbed it.

katzedecimal August 6 2008, 00:55:35 UTC

Hey if I can get away with three-paragraph snippets, you can get away with shortfic ^_^

summonercat August 31 2008, 21:56:20 UTC

*smacks Trickster* You're so lucky Piper loves you.
The last lines were wonderful and closed the story well. :D

I'm glad you have someone like Piper to support you too.

seftimiu September 1 2008, 03:13:35 UTC

Thank you! And I'm glad as well. Even on the days I'd like to drop him down a well and throw an anvil down after him. (discrete cough) but luckily I don't always feel that way. ;)

Stubborn men!