[ontae] the clock struck twelve and the sparkles expired

[pinkweather]

the clock struck twelve and the sparkles expired
~6,554 words
Gen-ish with a bit of Ontae on the side, PG, AU/parody
summary: A Cinderella story (um, in a manner of speaking), SHINee style.
a/n: Sort of a companion fic to lunayeppeo's into the woods without a single piece of tofu. I also point fingers at dubulust for this one. WHERE IS THE CINDERELLA!SHINEE FANART

Comments

[lunayeppeo]

I LOVE YOU

LOL AM I ALLOWED TO COMMENT HERE

ANYWAY I LOVE YOU GO POST THIS ;_________;

LOLOLOLOL JISUN-NOONA. And I love how the story's been twisted. The roles are played out really wonderfully, and it's so sweet and cute and TAEMIN DESIRING FOOD and d'aaawww bonding over chicken and dancing. The ending was cute, toooo~ Kekekekeke. Awesome work! ♥ And no, your writing skills have not degraded! ;A; Why you say that?

[pinkweather]

AW I LOVE YOU TOO ♥ :3

eto na po boss nakapost na 8D although my fanart request may never see the light of day because of this ;A; MADZ ALAM KONG NABABASA MO TO, TAPUSIN MO NA YUNG DRAWING MO DDD:<

sobs tysm for this and for the beta. i loled at all the side comments you put in there ♥ i think i have found my otp; it is taemin/food. they are perfect for each other, yes? aaaand i feel that they are degrading when writing starts seeming like a chore, which is happening more and more these days ;o;

[lunayeppeo]

♥ FOREVER X3

Dohohoho noooo let us have faith in him! If not, we can always cajole him when we meet him, ahahaha. Or ask hyungdeul to help us because her persuasion powers are the strongest. T________T

It was a pleasure! *A* Hee I had the stupidest grin on my face the entire time. XD Taemin/food! The elusive OTP! ;A; They need to be written more, yeeeeesssss. *A*

Hruu honestly, they're not! But I hope you will continue to be inspired and love writing! We'll cheer you on, yaaaay! ♥

[pinkweather]

♥♥♥

she promised me to cut him if he doesn't finish it (if he even started :\). so that means...i will defs get it sometime in the future ahahaha.

ah, taemin. i think that idol maknae rebellion stint is going to be my favorite variety show ep in forever just because we can see him ACTUALLY STUFFING HIS FACE WITH FOOD omg. ...or not. w/e, kid needs to eat more.

will be inspired when cor writes another shinee fic 8D lol ty ilu ♥

[hypothermal]

I automatically love anyone who characterizes Jonghyun as a boy with a bad hairdye and multiple piercings.

..actually no. LOL. But this is so cute, what with deadpan Taemin and sparkly fairy godfather Key and lazy delinquent Jonghyun and Minho who actually is a brat that does not help with housework, contrary to whatever Taemin believes.

This is super cute, why haven't I read you before? :D

[pinkweather]

haha, when the rdd concept first came out i was like "DDD: what have they done to jonghyun" but then i got used to it and i think i shall sort of miss his weird hair if he changes it again.

thank you very much for reading and commenting! and ummm idk, i don't write that often, so i guess that is it o:

[lovestrucksmile]

SPOT? Because Im lame ok? D:

[amine87]

lmao, this i-i-i-is AWESOME. a perfect twisting cinderella story omg. and kibum kibum kibum the fairy godmother was so sneaky. jjong and minho as stepbrothers, and of course the ending♥

[pinkweather]

i'm glad you liked it! thank you for reading :)

[hyungdeul]

you and lunayeppeo are gonna be the death of me. you two make the most adorable shinee fics ever, idk. ♥ gah i love everyone in this. i love how it's not the usual fairytale, and the twists were brills! and lol of course minho would be surrounded by older men 8D

HEE ENDING. THIS MEANS MORE, YES YES YES? *O* ♥

[pinkweather]

what are you talking about :\ you are going to write jonghyun's fairytale and then we can call it "the retarded shinee bedtime story series" or something y/y OK GO~

[hyungdeul]

what :\ b-but i suck at humor you can't make me do this ;__; i am not a funny person at all. or a person who does particularly well at narrative. just. no. :( BUT HEY, I'LL BE HERE TO PESTER YOU TO FINISH JJONG'S STORY CHEER YOU GUYS ON!

...jfc, i need a taemin icon D:

[pinkweather]

then make it an angsty fairytale or gory like the brothers grimm idc just WRITE MORE SHINEE FIC sobs T_T

...ask and pyor shall provide lol