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DEG: Kaoru/Toshiya: On The Lake

Feb 22, 2009 03:49

Title: On The Lake
Author: rheakurokawa
Pairing: Kaoru/Toshiya (Dir en Grey)
Rating: PG
Summary: In Tokyo Toshiya looked at him, like waiting for something, as if he waited and waited for something unspoken and said…[...]
Disclaimer: The events and characters depicted in the following piece of work are completely fictitious. Even though similarities with the ( Read more... )

deg, lake universe, rheakurokawa, toshiya, kaoru, kaoru/toshiya, dir en grey

Comments 26

kawasakininja February 22 2009, 22:22:52 UTC

You paint such a perfect picture. It's full of calmness. There is something about the proximity of water, especially a lake or a river that gives you a special feeling of calmness. There is also something like acceptance maybe, acceptance of love. I don't know, can't explain. It's hard to comment on stories like this. I don't like it when I can't explain.

rheakurokawa March 2 2009, 23:40:30 UTC

I, on the contrary, love it when you can't. It gives me a feeling like i did something right, even the tiniest bit, managed to put, to embed a little of the feelings i have inside into it. And those feelings are indescribable. Thank you very much for your words. I love the presence of water, some part of me is indefinitely linked to it and yes, it gives me infinite peace. The sound of water gently lapping at the wooden deck. I love that sound, and swimming naked and imagining Toshiya's perfect body stretching in the sun and swimming and yeah... it's that pic. Thank god for that pic.

and thank you.

bl4ckm4lice February 23 2009, 00:57:15 UTC

Ahhh... beautiful. Just beautiful silence.
<3

rheakurokawa March 2 2009, 23:41:24 UTC

<3 right back at you. Thank you for the words :)

novalent February 23 2009, 06:50:17 UTC

o m g

even there's no dialogue, the love's obviously seen.

kawaiii~ <3

rheakurokawa March 2 2009, 23:42:20 UTC

:) i'm glad you liked. I love the fictional love between these two, so yeah :) Glad you liked it. :)

kyoki_kiss February 23 2009, 16:00:45 UTC

The closing 'imagery' was great. Relaxing on the lake on that sunny day. I want to go to the docks now *laughs*

rheakurokawa March 2 2009, 23:43:59 UTC

Yeah me too :) Thank you very much. I admit i re-read this from time to time just to escape to that place once again. I'm grateful they took me there. Outside is freezing as fuck, but writing this was like a gentle summer in june. I love them. :) Thank you.

kyoki_kiss March 3 2009, 15:07:55 UTC

YES. It's cold here too and it makes me miserable. But it's always fun to chase away the cold with warm, happy, summer fics. :D I can feel the sunshine already.
Summer needs to hurry up and get here.

cadkitten February 27 2009, 20:42:24 UTC

rheakurokawa March 2 2009, 23:44:40 UTC

Thank you thank you thank you. :) And love back to you :)