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DEG: KAORU/TOSHIYA: UNTITLED

Aug 27, 2010 22:43

Title: Untitled
Author: cateris
Pairing: Kaoru/Toshiya (Dir en Grey)
Rating: NC-17
Summary: From behind he can see the way he's scratching at his nape, the necklace he's wearing entangling in the soft and fluffy hair growing there.
Disclaimer: The events and characters depicted in the following piece of work are completely fictitious. Even though ( Read more... )

deg, cateris, kaoru/toshiya

Comments 6

erikaoi August 27 2010, 21:42:45 UTC

That is hawt and swett dalls.kaoru a teaser and seducing?thats something but toshiya is the devil,turn kao like that.nice nice

cateris August 28 2010, 22:04:44 UTC

bauci August 28 2010, 06:35:56 UTC

Oh the opening scene is just subtle and sexy and serene, so nice. And this:

His big palms play with Kaoru's strands and he lifts his head just so they can see each other and he gives this incredibly sweet and young smile.

♥

cateris August 28 2010, 22:13:06 UTC

Oh the opening scene is just subtle and sexy and serene, so nice.

*laughs* I had to re-read my fic to remember LOL. Thanks, honey <3 I'm really glad you enjoyed it :) I really like working with them like this. For me their relationship has reached a certain point of serenity and calmness, so that's why maybe everything shows through this way *smiles warmly* I'm at peace with my otp and they bring me only love unlike Kai/Uruha who are gbthshsrthrhrt :( *bitchslaps her gazette otp* LOL.

His big palms play with Kaoru's strands and he lifts his head just so they can see each other and he gives this incredibly sweet and young smile.

Oh that :) That...that is...yeaaaah...*laughs softly* that is Toshiya alright *smiles*

Thank you for your comment, love, and for your presence and everything <3 like always

lady_sb August 29 2010, 03:03:19 UTC

How really languid and pretty and just sweet.....

I always like your writings <3 thanks

phoenix_engel August 30 2010, 13:51:33 UTC

Toshiya seems so serious ;)

There's many hints about how used they are to the other one's presence but still appreciative. And so comfortable.

Really liked the mood and how they read each other.

""tosh-" and his voice breaks because he's so close, fucking hell he's close, and Toshiya is driving him mad, and Toshiya is heavy, and Toshiya makes small noises like he's depending on him with his life, and he is, and he knows that, and it takes just this little thought and Toshiya to bite him by the neck for him to come and to take Toshiya with him as well. For him to feel all this big expanse of skin and weight of this confusing boy who caught him in this invisible leash a long time ago. "
favourite paragraph, especially the last line :)