[heroes] Evolution: Volume V

[whomever]

The Sylar But Not Quite edition. (I should say the second was written before volume four aired.)

Title: Paradise by the Dashboard Light
Pairing: Zane!Sylar/Mohinder Suresh
Rating: PG
Summary: ... He likes riding shotgun.

Comments

[whomever]

Aw, thanks, Pixie! It makes me glee so hard when you read my stuff!

[backtograce]

OH MAN. Perfect Sylar/Mohinder moment -- I loved it. If Sylar can forget the little detail that Mohinder is still only human, he is perfect just then. You and your pretty words.

I love you exploring characters in opposite genders -- it's so fun. :]

[whomever]

I need to write more Sylar/Mohinder, especially season one. Mohinder's just too damn trusting.

Thank you!

[boudecia7]

Ooh, Matt/Sylar! There's never enough :D

[whomever]

Never! (: Thanks!

[levitatethis]

This is a fantastic Mohinder/Sylar drabble. I'm always impressed when a writer can convey so much with few words. It really is a talent.

I like that this drabble skirts both the dark and potentially (strangely) sweet side of them. Sylar is driven by his own personal gain but is also unknowingly distracted by Mohinder. You capture Sylar's self-importance to the point where he doesn't realize that Mohinder has noticed his behaviour. Interesting that he doesn't lie, but is honest when answering the question and I love Mohinder's nervous reaction...but also his own peaked interest, returned right back. And then Sylar's own attitude towards Mohinder is altered in some way...he's no longer just an accessory but the possibility of so much more.

Great job!

[whomever]

Thank you very much! I loved hearing your thoughts. (:

[mabetini]

"Instead, he says with utmost honesty, “You look nice.” A heinously dumb version of what he wants to say: You look beautiful, you look worthy of much more than a taxicab and a run-down apartment."

PERFECT. I loved this so much!! :D

[whomever]

Thank you!