[heroes] Evolution: Volume II

[whomever]

I apologise for any incorrect Spanish. I'm afraid French is my foreign language of expertise.

Title: Left Behind
Pairing: Peter Petrelli/Maya Herrera
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Lastly, Peter visits Isaac Mendez’s loft.

Comments

[phoenixgfawkes]

The one with Peter and Maya was truly chilling, especially the last sentence. Poor Peter, he always gets to be the hero of the wrong people.

[whomever]

Thank you! Yeah, I would have liked for them to meet in the second season. The tension would have been palpable.

[bellonablack]

You've got a great grasp of humanity here. (Very impressive) Because I mean, you captured the most normal, mundane things and made them beautiful.

Like Peter's stairway to nowhere. That's so beautiful, really. :-) As for Peter, I think it made sense to his character, and to the hugeness of the threat and his reaction to it. I think some part of the TV series got lost under the surreality of the powers, and this was kind of season 1 great writing. I love that he found Maya, who was so broken. I'm honestly a little scared for him since she's still thinking of the other biblical boy. O-o

With the Mylar one, I'm guessing--fight club? (hopes, I'm not sure) But that's a stroke of genius. I like it, Sylar's reaction with keeping the pages fluttering around like that--means Mohinder got to him. I remember that line too, lol. <3 (I was like not a snowflake--darn. Maybe next time around.)

GREAT JOB. I hearted these. They were beautiful. You've got a way with words.

[whomever]

This reply is just heinously late - I honestly don't know how I missed this comment, but I wanted to thank you so much for your feedback and kind words!

[bellonablack]

My reply to your reply is late. (lol lj? what the hell?)

But yeah, I still loved these. :-) I def. meant every word, your writing is tres awesome.

[ashedrake]

OMG, not Chinese paper cut torture! Poor Mohinder *grabs him and runs*

This is veeeeery good.

[whomever]

Well, his superpower is punching bag. (:

Thanks!

[maxinegray]

This is just.. Wow!! I love the Mylar.. absolutely LOVE IT!

Yay for beat up Mohinder!! :)

[whomever]

Thank you!

[cellshader]

This is just...perfect. It's so completely them, and so completely and huggably first season, and to involve CHUCK on top of all of that (not just the movie, but the BOOK)...you are completely my hero.

Wonderful work here, you did a fantastic job.

[whomever]

Sorry for the superlate reply (but I don't like to leave loose ends)! Thank you so much for your comments!