Comments | pinkceptional: [twilight] Made of Glass

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[twilight] Made of Glass

Sep 20, 2008 13:39

Not a songfic, but written for “That’s Okay” by The Hush Sound from their recent album “Goodbye Blues,” over at twilightficmix. Many thanks to my wonderful beta, interfectionThis story takes place in the years before Twilight and all the way into the very beginning of New Moon. There are definite AU elements, specifically with the timeline and passing of events. What I mean ( Read more... )

length: chaptered (ongoing), pairing: het, fandom: twilight, rating: pg-13, challenge: twilightficmix, genre: angst/dark, genre: romance, ship: twilight: jasper/rosalie

Comments 16

churched October 10 2008, 20:18:02 UTC

I told my friend (the one that legitimately enjoys Twilight) a few weeks ago that if I were to ever pick up the books again, it would only be for my interest in Rosalie. I love my bitches, what can I say? So this was really interesting to me, even though I don't know that much about Jasper. I also liked that you addressed that Edward's ability is nothing more than an invasion of privacy. The imagery was very well done, with the repetitive motif of Rosalie as being icy. Basically, I loved the whole thing.

And so ends Martha's review-a-thon '08... for now!

whomever October 15 2008, 02:03:51 UTC

Aw, thank you, Martha! (: Agreed, it would be much more interesting to read a book from Rosalie's point of view, rather than Bedward's.

<3 I went to Martha's review-a-thon '08 and all I got was this lousy BFF!

churched October 15 2008, 02:13:36 UTC

♥

Ssh, the BFF will hear you! XD

lazorsaurus December 12 2008, 08:25:36 UTC

wow. this is beautiful. i accidentally skipped the prologue and it was really interesting to go back and realize HE WAS THERE. potentially, the same affect regardless of order but...i'll believe it's extra special this way.

wow. you killed emmett. yes, you certainly did not avoid him.

it's easy to make rosalie very one-dimensional, very cruel, very vain. and she is, the latter two, at least...but you're showing us WHY and it makes this great.

i love your jasper. i mean, LOVE YOUR JASPER. and carlisle and esme. i like speculating on pre-forks life. edward is fantastic as well. the more i think/read about him, the more arrogant/rude/egotistical/insensitive i find him. grr, edward.

i hope you keep working on this. it's fantastic.

whomever April 18 2009, 02:56:42 UTC

Oh my word, this reply is heinously late. I am so sorry! Sometimes comments get lost in my inbox and I only find them again when re-editing old entries. My apologies!

Thank you very much! I'm very happy you enjoyed this story. I've been stuck on chapter two for ages. I'm trying to kickstart it yet again this week. I hope it works out.

(And concerning Edward: personally, I prefer him when he's arrogant/rude/egotistical/insensitive with a surface gentleman complex. At least then he has a personality.)

waitingforjimmy February 4 2010, 05:46:10 UTC

This is...breath taking. I hope you decide to continue this. I don't even know what to say. I'm speechless at the beauty of this piece. Thank you.