Wow, that, and they broke up. Oh, the chance for the new better life for everyone. Going from here, let's see what happen. And it completely depends on the pen of the very good script writer here. Great work, Pink_stitchy! And long time no see ^^. *wave
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koba-chan~~ long time no see too..I miss you >,< So happy that you choose to read my writing(even it not that great)
yeah they brake up and you're right, that what the best for everyone..haha I'm not that really good *blush*
You felt relieved they break up?so do I!!because Yamachan can reunite with his love one, Yuto..so Yamachan is your bias in HeySayJump?I love him too, he sooo cute nee~~
Ehh you notice that?!it because YamaJima is my bias!(good job on notice that) I really love it seeing them together, it was like they were made for each other!!that's why most of my writing were about them >,yeah Chinen need to wake up before it too late. everyone has their own limit, maybe someday Ryutaro will reach his limit and he can't keep his promise anymore.Hopefully Chinen will realize this before it's too late, before Ryutaro meet someone else
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This, was by far, one of the most beautiful fics that I have read.It just constantly kept my eyes hooked to the words as they follow along the paragraphs and dialogues. minus my chiitaro bias here. really. ♥ :3
Chinen should really realize that his cousin would go through thick and thin with him, but I do wonder if Chinen realizes that even though Ryutaro promised that he'd be with Chinen forever, there might be a time that Ryutaro will leave him because he'll surely lose his cool...All in all, LOVED IT ♥ This fic is surely a favorite of mine now (≡^∇^≡)
You know what I can't stop smiling and grinning after reading your comment..I'm totally happy and content now..never thought that I will received such a lovely and wonderful compliment *cries*
ahh you're ChiiTaro bias?..So do I!!
Yeah Chinen should already realizes that. I mean he can't expect ryutaro to be by his side forever since he didn't make it clear about their relationship status..like you said, to some extent point Ryutaro might reach his limit and leave Chinen..everyone have their own limit in loving someone.
ahhh I'm so happy that this fic is your favorite and hope it's always be >,<
Thank you sooo much for reading this fic and also for the inspiring comment and compliment..It's really means a lot to me *hugs*
I'm not a big Chiitaro fan (because i'm very into YAMAJIMA!) but i really want them to end up together and be happy as much as Yamajima... i don't want ryuu to be just a substitute... i mean, chii should have feelings for ryuu, he just don't realize it but really... i want them to admit it!... hahahaha.... affected much?!
*demo, i like how the story was presented, though...*
i love the bitterness of the story... love isn't all roses right?... ^^
It's hurt, right??for having a relationship that you didn't know where you stand at..it like being left hanging without a rope =(
ah YAMAJIMA fan!!me tooo, nice to meet you >,<
yeah Chinen did have a feeling for Ryutaro, but he didn't notice that. Maybe because he thought the love that he had toward Ryutaro was just a love for a cousin.someone really need to wake Chinen up before he loose Ryutaro..
hahaha yeah, effected much but I'm happy that you felt that way. It's show that my writing reach you..
love isn't all roses?hey I love that quote, bitter but yet sweet and lovely..
thank you sooo much for reading this and the comment..It's really make me happy ^______^
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So happy that you choose to read my writing(even it not that great)
yeah they brake up and you're right, that what the best for everyone..haha I'm not that really good *blush*
You felt relieved they break up?so do I!!because Yamachan can reunite with his love one, Yuto..so Yamachan is your bias in HeySayJump?I love him too, he sooo cute nee~~
Ehh you notice that?!it because YamaJima is my bias!(good job on notice that) I really love it seeing them together, it was like they were made for each other!!that's why most of my writing were about them >,yeah Chinen need to wake up before it too late. everyone has their own limit, maybe someday Ryutaro will reach his limit and he can't keep his promise anymore.Hopefully Chinen will realize this before it's too late, before Ryutaro meet someone else ( ... )
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Chinen should really realize that his cousin would go through thick and thin with him, but I do wonder if Chinen realizes that even though Ryutaro promised that he'd be with Chinen forever, there might be a time that Ryutaro will leave him because he'll surely lose his cool...All in all, LOVED IT ♥ This fic is surely a favorite of mine now (≡^∇^≡)
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ahh you're ChiiTaro bias?..So do I!!
Yeah Chinen should already realizes that. I mean he can't expect ryutaro to be by his side forever since he didn't make it clear about their relationship status..like you said, to some extent point Ryutaro might reach his limit and leave Chinen..everyone have their own limit in loving someone.
ahhh I'm so happy that this fic is your favorite and hope it's always be >,<
Thank you sooo much for reading this fic and also for the inspiring comment and compliment..It's really means a lot to me *hugs*
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YESS. A proud one (o^-')b
I wish they can just open up instead of just using each other. They deserve each other despite the fact that they are cousins.
I don't think any other fic can overtake this one. This one is just really...lol i'm still a bit speechless..
Thank you for writing it! You're welcome ≧(´▽`)≦ *hugs*
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Yeah they deserve each others, if only one of them have a courage to admit their true feeling..and it will solve everything >,>
hahaha..I'm really really happy that my story reach you and you're always welcome here (if you want to re-read the fic)
hai~~it's always being my pleasure *hugback*
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nameless tie? it hurts so much!!! aw.... =('
I'm not a big Chiitaro fan (because i'm very into YAMAJIMA!) but i really want them to end up together and be happy as much as Yamajima... i don't want ryuu to be just a substitute... i mean, chii should have feelings for ryuu, he just don't realize it but really... i want them to admit it!... hahahaha.... affected much?!
*demo, i like how the story was presented, though...*
i love the bitterness of the story... love isn't all roses right?... ^^
really cute... =D
thank you...
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ah YAMAJIMA fan!!me tooo, nice to meet you >,<
yeah Chinen did have a feeling for Ryutaro, but he didn't notice that. Maybe because he thought the love that he had toward Ryutaro was just a love for a cousin.someone really need to wake Chinen up before he loose Ryutaro..
hahaha yeah, effected much but I'm happy that you felt that way. It's show that my writing reach you..
love isn't all roses?hey I love that quote, bitter but yet sweet and lovely..
thank you sooo much for reading this and the comment..It's really make me happy ^______^
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nooooooo...
i hope it didn't end like this.. T^T
because~~~
it's too sad... T^T
i want Ryu and Chii to be together~~~~
and i was kinda surprised when Ryutaro stripped Chinen off and Chinen just don't mind it... then at the end part i saw the "did it" ... xDD
sooooo love Ryutaro here~~~
i want to meet someone with that character too.. >o<
hope there's another sequel?
just ignore me... xD
otsukaresama!! :D
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i super like the story~~~ xDD
even though it kinda ended in angsty way.. xD
/pats ryutaro's back
just confess already~~~~~~~~
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i'm making my own sequel already..
you wrote my OTP biases so i really, really like the story~~
but even if it's not chiitaro~ i'll still like it.. xDD
/lights fireworks again
i want to write another long comment but i need to go.. xDD
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I'm sooo happy that you like this sequel too (even it have an angst ending)
hey you know what?what don't you write a sequel to this..since it your OTP bias I'm pretty sure you will come out with a really good one..
So what do you say?wanna do it?
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if i have time later, i'll try finishing it~~ :D
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Ahh does that mean I have an ability to read other mind*laugh*
Owh I really hope that you like this sequel too as much as I do even tough it had an angst ending >,
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