As I Lay Writing

[pink_laces_fool]

A Lilly For Addie

The whiners whine
While the criers cry
But what about poor Addie
Who had a family
She didn't call her own
An ungrateful daughter
Psychotic son
Sloth of a husband
Bear of a son
Fish of a son
Horse is her son
And a confused fellow
She kept on the side
Holier than thou neighbor
Fell to her knees at the lies
And resentment built up
In Addie's child

Comments

[liseypoo]

hahaha I really like most of it.
It flows pretty well, but some of it confuses me.
"And the girl pulls a knife
For a clever surprise
In the young boys heart"
Who is the girl and no one really "pulled a knife" literally or metaphorically in the story. Funny topic though.

[pink_laces_fool]

the passage on whatever page where dewey dell talks about her dress coming off and there's Darl ->Kids together/original sin
then later in that passage it talks about Vardamen knowing or something like that and he's cutting a fish and Dewey Dell takes his knife because he knows

or something like that, who knows Faulkner was so drunk I bet he doesn't even remember writing the book much less what happens in it, so its not our faults for not understanding what's going on

[bhindblooeyes]

you should email that to mrs brannon. for real. :)

[lsu_pride060689]

haha i like it

[artistic_eyes]

hey matt! add me! NOW :)