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pink_flame_87

Bones Fanfiction-There's a Puddle (Chapter 2)

Mar 14, 2009 22:03

Special Agent Seeley Booth entered the hospital in a flurry of anxiety and annoyance. He had only left her in the Jeffersonion a few hours ago, and it was just like her to wait until he had his back turned and then put herself in some ridiculous situation and put more strain on his heart than his doctor would approve of.

“What happened?” He ( Read more... )

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buffyangellvr23 March 15 2009, 02:32:14 UTC

Not sure how I missed the first part of this, but I hope you post more soon!

pink_flame_87 March 15 2009, 02:40:59 UTC

Thanks for reading! I'm going to post the next chapter as soon as I can.

whitelily22 March 15 2009, 02:32:46 UTC

Ive been waiting for the second chapter for so long lol! yay!
you've got the characters down perfectly :)
booth and cam in the elevator..aww that was sweet, i love their friendship :)

ok booth bounding down the hospital hallway, demanding to see where brennan is...thats so him

omg hahaha lol brennan kissing booth's fingers! lmao priceless

can't wait till the next chapter!
don't make us wait too long !

pink_flame_87 March 15 2009, 02:42:54 UTC

Sorry to keep you waiting, the next chapter will be up soon.

I'm glad the characters seem more or less like themselves, I try!
I think Booth and Cam are cute now that's softer around the edges lol. And I like that she proves that Booth is loyal to people once he starts caring about them!

Yes, Booth would totally bound if Brennan was in the hospital lol.

I thought the finger kiss was funny too. :p

sopranozone March 15 2009, 04:46:36 UTC

Hahahaha! This is AMAZING!!! I don't know WHY I haven't found this before now, but this is epic.

kudos. Can't wait for more.

pink_flame_87 March 15 2009, 05:10:31 UTC

Thanks! I'll post more as soon as I can. Epic...wow...ha ha, made my day.

mesince93 March 15 2009, 21:11:27 UTC

I've been expecting this second chapter! Let's see if you're as good as I expect you to be..! ;) (No, I'll read it later tonight, in bed, as I always do..you should be proud, me reading YOUR story in MY bed!:P)

Forget about what I said, I'll drop you a message if I don't forget.

rubberbisquit March 15 2009, 22:55:55 UTC

This is pretty funny and a good concept. I'm interested in seeing where you're going to take thing :)