[pjo/lukenico] HUMMING BIRD, PART 2

[ezyl]

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Comments

[faerichylde]

fucking motherfucker, this is awesome. there arent even words, man, there arent even words. this was absolutely brilliant; especially the way you said things without overtly coming out and saying them, and the way you split the story up into little vignettes -- wonderful. i really, really love this ♥

[ezyl]

oh hey bb you're so fast i didn't even see this comment |D ~*thanks for readingggg*~ I DIDN'T KNOW YOU LIKED PJO TOOOOO :>

[hit_in_the_usa]

My brain died somewhere in the middle of part one.
You are amazing, and this is some crazy piece of awesome.

I want to reread in an attempt to understande half of it, but then it would lose it's magic. (I'll do so later :D)

[ezyl]

ffffffffff

;3; i-i'm amazed you were able to trawl through this unorganized mess, at all. and lolol if you -do- reread, you'll find so many mechanical errors i don't even ;aslkfj

thanks so much for these kind words. ♥

[wise_stupidity]

Aw...I'm so proud of you.

You already know how I feel about this thing. :D So the same, only it's improved. Plus, the third time through (which would technically be the first time through in finalized form), tons more stuff starts clicking into place. I noticed way more details than I did while I was editing...and in a good way. Swear.

[ezyl]

RIGHT NOW I AM YOUR BIGGEST FAN

[wise_stupidity]

But tomorrow you'll be someone else's biggest fan. :'( But I am ALWAYS YOUR BIGGEST FAN anyway.

[ezyl]

YOU REALLY DON'T KNOW HOW HARD I LOVE YOU DO YOU D=

AT ANY RATE I STILL LOVE YOUR COMMENT SPAMMING ;ASKLDFJ

[anonymous]

stop asking why because i dont actully know