[FMA/RoyRiza] Pacific Ocean, Telephone Line

Oct 08, 2010 22:35

titled Pacific Ocean, Telephone Line
pair Roy Mustang/Riza Hawkeye
rated PG
warnings for boys being boys. not so much romance as blatant canon-bending and uh, somehow ZADIG and Elizaveta Héderváry got involved? o///o
summary He had her at hello.
notes 1500 words written for peridottears. Was meant to be her birthday gift ( Read more... )

%romances, rated pg, there is het, [fma], omg! fic, %angstyle

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peridottears October 10 2010, 04:26:53 UTC
GOTT VERDAMMT, ezyl!

FREAKING. HELL. I LOVE THIS~~~ SO MUCH~ AND THE STRUCTURE~ SO MUCH LOVE FOR THE STRUCTURE. AND DAMN YOU, I'M STILL WONDERING ABOUT THE FACTORS SURROUNDING HER NOT HAVING MUSTANG AROUND PROBABLY FROM OLD AGE OR ANOTHER WOMAN OR SOMETHING DAMN YOUUUUU FOR TEMPTING ME AND GIVING ME THIS AWESOME AWESOME CANDY AAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH.

I LOVE YOU, ezyyyyyyl~

-Sniffles- Havoc's Wonderland, and twenty-thousand leagues :'D A -- and -- and! ELIZAVETA! YOU FREAKING PUT ELIZAVETA IN IT~~~~ GAVE HER AWESOME DIALOGUE BECAUSE IT'S SO FUN AND REMINDS US THAT SHE'S HUNGARIAN, AND HAHA, COLONEL MUSTANG~

Fanatic colonel leering over her shoulder...xD

Punches him in the face? -- what, no frying pan? XD

-Huggles you-

And the internet is really really really great, nee, Maria? 8D GREAT FOR POR -- -shot-

Bwahaha, you actually took the dialogue from the video xD My dialogue went to Mustang...somehow with one fic I went from corporal to colonel...xDDDDDD

<3333333 ( ... )

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ezyl October 10 2010, 06:12:38 UTC
A;DSKLFJDKLJ I AM SO GLAD YOU LIKED IT EEEEEEEEEEE AND YOU CAUGHT ALL THE STUFF I WANTED YOU TO CATCH, TOO

FFFFFF I HOPE HUNGARY WASN'T TOO MUCH OF A DEAD GIVEAWAY LMAO

I LOVE YOUR CAPSLOCK

OH CRIPES YOUR COMMENT IS SO LONG ♥______♥

YOU ARE THE COLONAL IN MY HEART /CHEESE

<3333333333333333333333

and my new lj. perhaps this post might interest you? :3 /shot

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camudekyu October 10 2010, 04:46:19 UTC
Ah! Voltaire! *clutches chest and swoons*

I would like to save this gem, or series of gems, and look back over them again and again. A story about distance and what we do to cross it or not cross it. And I love that you concluded with Astarte. I love it.

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ezyl October 10 2010, 06:08:44 UTC
;A; You are too kind. Thank you for reading. I'm glad there was someone else out there who looked past the insanity and found the Astarte.

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starseed4 October 12 2010, 17:48:34 UTC
Something about the last line absolutely killed me. This is so well written and everything about it just makes me want to wrench my heart out of my chest. There are not enough words to explain how much I loved it. I hope you write this pairing again sometime, because this is one of the best portrayals of them I've seen in a while.

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ezyl October 12 2010, 18:53:24 UTC
t-thank you so much! glad you liked ♥

...and lolol I quite like this pairing, so this probably won't be the last you see of me ahaha. :>

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