One-shot: The wrong pose

[sashjun]

Title: The wrong pose
Pairing: Nakamaru,Ueda
Rating: NC 17
Warnings: pwp
Summary: Prompted with “something about Nakamaru's nyan-pose, that has a weird effect on Ueda? xD ”
Notes: Another repost from the meme I did for my friends, specifically for parasol_odori, originally posted here. 1963 words

Comments

[snow_meow]

Ueda and his kinks.
I'm not surprise that he gets hot under the collar when Nakamaru's nyan-pose ^_~

Just what happen to Commander Maru? ...He got whipped. LOL

[sashjun]

Ah, he is special :D

LOL.

Thanks for the comment!

[ayame_hadouken]

Oh man, I really loved this. Favorite line: “Nakamaru, I think you just became an object of sexual desire in my mind. Congratulations.” Aughhh *_______*

No more words, just <3<3<3

[sashjun]

Thank you! Ah that, Ueda clearly thinks Nakamaru should be honored ;D

Thank you ♥ again >.>

[ryogrande]

i already commented to this elsewhere, but i feel compelled to do so again with my shiny new maruda icons.

so, i say again: UNF. i fucking love maruda. *_* and how kame keeps sneaking into your writing. hehehe.

[sashjun]

!!! I have yet to go and get some of those you linked. I always forget!

♥

I think this is going to be more and more common occurrence simply because Jin is now out of question so we're moving down the list of KAT-TUN members I'm comfortable (more or less) writing

anyway thank you again <333

[je_levy]

Ugh I just loved this so so so SO much. It was exactly the Maruda I've needed since forever and I do so love the way you write them. So much of all the right love and all the right understated tension. It's magic

*_________*

First the fact that Ueda develops a Maru-induced kink and he has no other reaction in mind than to add Maru to a list of "object[s] of sexual desire" AND act on it. I love the way you write their dialogue especially; the mannerisms and word choices are so very them even in English. It just rings true, Idek <33333

Like

“Picked it up in the agency,” Ueda says. “Don’t change the subject.”

“I didn’t! What should I even say to you criticizing me doing that weird pose anyway? You know I don’t actually get that kind of stuff. And you didn’t do it at all, you cheat!”

How very Maru to respond in incredulity to a random spot of criticism entirely unimportant to him. And

“I’m never sensible. Or adult,” Ueda tells him flat out. “Just this one time. Show me what you’ve got.”

My GOD I'm in love; so so in love.

“

[je_levy]

My jaw dropped at some of those lines because WOW *fans self* just wow ugh no words that aren't embarrassing :'D

the next moment he reaches out to Nakamaru, and his fingers brush behind Nakamaru’s ear and continue down his neck. “Actually, it seems that it will be more than just that silly pose. You still look hot, and now it’s all of you,” he says. This time it’s a little hesitant. “Is that okay?”

I'm sorry, but you're amazing. This is so well-put and so very him an so adorable all at once. Oh, Maruda; lovely Maruda <333

“I’ll leave if you really want me to,” Ueda says at last, pulling his hand away. “But I know you. If I leave, you’re going to panic, overthink everything, and your prude self is going to kick in. Then maybe you’ll need to talk about it, but I won’t be here, and you won’t want to talk to me, anyway. So you’ll call Kame, and that won’t make you feel any better because he will make you go through all the details. So I’d prefer if you just do your thing while I’m here. I’m fine with never doing this again. But I’m

[sashjun]

I never know how to response to things like this, but it makes me all *__________________* and GDFZUISFHED HGV IFHKV GK CGH
AND *implodes*

I'm so happy that people can identify with them like this. I might write them in many ways and it's fun seeing what works and how well and just hsdflkjgdsfh

Also some of the things you quoted: yay!

AUGH YOU KNOW WHAT? I SHOULD JUST COME OUT AND SAY IT. EVERYTHING, ABSOLUTELY EVERYTHING UEDA SAYS IN THIS IS A FAVE. He's my favourite Ueda. I jus-- i JUST NEED YOU TO KNOW THIS, OK? ;A;)/
Ah, you have no idea, no idea what you do to me. ♥ hearts; hearts; Thank you!

Also ignore you, you saying sorry, PLEASE I love this and you should never stop being this amazingly <333

reading on, ugh amazing? dhio efh so much happiness. thank you for being so, so generous with me. Also picking THAT part after Nakamura looks at Ueda *___*

masterpiece of a pwp.ROFL ILU

[jtriskell]

[sashjun]

Thanks!