Comments | pillow_verse: One-shot: Yamapi In The Men’s Room With The Wicked Dance Move

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One-shot: Yamapi In The Men’s Room With The Wicked Dance Move

Jul 24, 2011 12:09

Title: Yamapi In The Men’s Room With The Wicked Dance Move
Pairing/Group: Ryo/Ueda, Yamapi, Jin, random cameos of other Johnnys’
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Two timelines.
Notes: Around 11 200 words. There are two timelines: Standard text is the present one taking place in Paris and is moving forwards, the one in Courier font takes place in the past, ( Read more... )

!cross-over, r: nc-17, p: ryo/ueda, lenght: one-shot, group: news, p: jin/yamapi, +collaboration+, group: kat-tun

Comments 25

hanaakari_it July 24 2011, 11:20:43 UTC

"Oh it’s only for kids," Ryo says, disappointed.
Ueda gives him a quick glance then chuckles. "I’m sure they’d let you go for a ride if you paid. You are practically a child size by European standards."
Ryo glares, but it is only halfhearted. Soon enough a smirk spreads on his face. "Or I could just ride you-for free. Donkey face."
Ueda snorts. "Could you, really?" he asks then gives Ryo a wink. Suddenly Ryo’s ears turn pink
I love couple dork innuendo! And Ryo child-size, which it's really a tiny package of awesomeness.

After nudging Ueda over towards the far side of the bed, Ryo walks over to drop the shirt in the trash can before walking around to climb into the far side of the bed. He lies down with his back facing Ueda.
"Your face isn’t that ugly," Ueda says quietly as he lightly touches his fingers to Ryo’s back.
That's sweet, I can picture little shy Ryo trying to being all though and nonchalant.

"Wait a minute, if I’m wearing your underwear, what are you wearing?" Ueda whispers to Ryo, and Ryo looks down and bites his lip ( ... )

sashjun August 6 2011, 13:00:14 UTC

Haha two of those quotes were written by my partner :D But it just makes me happy you liked them all enough to pick them out.

Thanks!

jtriskell July 24 2011, 11:57:01 UTC

sashjun August 6 2011, 13:00:28 UTC

thank you for reading!

lybrint July 24 2011, 12:02:28 UTC

Nice fic ^_^ Pin are really a good friends *wink* RyoDa must thanks them 4 all of it ^^
Thank U 4 sharing =)

sashjun August 6 2011, 13:01:01 UTC

ahaha Pin are just a little crazy and maybe a bit bored.

Anyway, thanks for reading!

snow_meow July 24 2011, 16:31:22 UTC

I love this fic.

I love the banther between Ryo and Ueda.
The moment I read the words "pony and donkey rides", I was so expecting the conversation and words that would be used by Ryo and Ueda. You didn't disappointment me there.

The sexual innuendo is so cute.

Now I get it why there is two different timelines.
You managed to pull that off really well.

sashjun August 6 2011, 13:03:21 UTC

Thanks!

LOL really it wasn't even so intentional. Just that they really are common in Paris, but I guess it fit.

Thanks for a nice comment. It is good to hear two time lines went well.

jubelcinta July 25 2011, 04:34:36 UTC

gah! loved this fic! it was soo nice of PiN to do those things for the sake of Ryo and Uepi being together! such good friends! (n___n)

sashjun August 6 2011, 13:04:11 UTC

Surely, their reasons were all altruitic ;D

Thanks for reading!