Trains and Trails verse: 02. Playing with fire

Jun 23, 2010 21:53

Title: 02. Playing with fire
Pairing: Ueda centric, and Junno/Koki flashes
Rated: R (for Ueda’s “wild” imagination) - just to be safe
Warnings: AU! Trains and Trails verse, there are and will be (in the future) mentions of sex, descriptions of foreplay and possible kinks . . .
Summary: His name is Ueda Tatsuya. He is a rather normal, one might ( Read more... )

!au, group: kanjani8, ~trains and trails verse~, r: r, feat: subaru, centric: ueda, feat: jin, group: kat-tun

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lastofthewildes June 23 2010, 21:34:01 UTC
Muahaha. I love it. I've been secretly waiting for an update since I read the first chapter. I love Jin and Ueda together so I'm really excited to see where this is going.

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sashjun June 24 2010, 07:56:58 UTC
ah, thank you! I hope I won´t disapoint and I am happy Jin and Ueda work for you.

<3

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goldfreckled June 23 2010, 21:39:31 UTC
OMG IT'S JIN AND THAT'S RIDICULOUSLY APPROPRIATE!! :D
I love that verse so much (already)!!
I don't have anything coherent to say, but I really like how you describe Uebo and especially that mix of outside/real world and fandom/writing.
♥♥♥♥

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sashjun June 24 2010, 07:59:38 UTC
HAHA I think that´s why it is him because he just . . . fits.

awwww thank you, I am so happy to hear people like it.

The mix is hard to keep in like check, so I hope it is not very confusing. And Ueda. He isn´t the most perfect person out there (at least in my head) and that´s what I like about him.

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tokeruyouna June 24 2010, 00:02:13 UTC
and probably telling of his resentments and disappointments (the writer in Ueda adds)
It is interesting that you added this. Do you actually think about stuff like this when you write? I think my writing tends to be devoid of this sort of thing quite often, since I am not so much the type to think things like this in general.

That was more than a little creepy, yo. (The kind of creepy I don't like.) Though I like the idea of branching out, it can go too far. *remembers some quite scarring things I have betaed*

You think too much of one pwp. It’s just fiction, has nothing to do with reality.
I slightly wonder if that was a veiled insult directed at me.

Who allowed you to cross-dress as Minnie Mouse?
In this context, yes, this is why I now fear my neighbors.

“Are you crazy?”

“You are the one writing gay porn on the train,”
Seriously.

keep it all low key so that the development is believableAnother thing I never think about. I wonder if people do ( ... )

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sashjun June 24 2010, 08:29:34 UTC
ah, this smells of an essay. The line was a bit of a mocking of Ueda´s character, or Ueda himself mocking his own personality, however you take it. He wasn´t writing at the time, it was just, you know how some people are very pragmatic? Someone like that might say he looks bitter (if they´d say/think anything at all). Then there are those that just talk and think dramatically, poetically, loftily all the time; there is always a story, a heart wrenching one even, behind everything, they go into extremes in their reasoning . . . And then people who have creative tendencies do sometimes get this way even if not all the time. It´s like Ueda has time and so his mind goes further than it normally would, and he is blaming it on that creative part of his mind. I guess. And he is mocking it a little, and the guy too ( ... )

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tokeruyouna June 24 2010, 23:16:20 UTC
I was thinking the Nino/Nagase was really creepy. Then the person commenting on that fic also said it was creepy, so I was agreeing with them, apparently less obviously than I had thought.

I do not know why Minnie was not your first thought either. Or second for that matter. I was serious when I said I have never laughed so loud in my life. It just suddenly came out and surprised even me.

I am now wondering why on earth this comment made up for you not asking people about the fics in this verse.

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sashjun June 24 2010, 23:22:18 UTC
it just kind of was out there . . .

lol that is hard to tell . . . I might still ask you on IM some day ;D

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fancyann1974 June 24 2010, 02:11:25 UTC
wonderful update
cant wait for the next
thanki you so much for sharing :)

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sashjun June 24 2010, 08:00:40 UTC
ah thank you!
I hope I will continue to not disapoint.

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dorayaki_chan June 24 2010, 04:07:50 UTC
ha ha ha giant nagase vs chibi nino it,s like David vs Goliath

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sashjun June 24 2010, 08:01:24 UTC
lol that is what stuck out ? ;D I´m glad I was able to amuse you.

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