Avatar-gate 08 part 2: my letter

[pikapika217]

In response to this post: http://pikapika217.livejournal.com/211180.html

Here is my letter as is right now. fell free to give me any tips/pointers you want asap before I print out this version and mail it.

Comments

[pikapika217]

this is why I post things here! that's a much better change. I'll edit that in.

new edition -

[pikapika217]

To Ms. Kennedy and Mr. Marshall

[picklepud]

Excellent letter.

Perfect.

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