Comments | pigbuns: SPN Fic: Take It Easy, Eagles Challenge

neetha in pigbuns

Mar 24, 2008 21:32

Title: Take It Easy
Series/Challenge: Eagles
Rating: PG
Characters: A Winchester Brother
Word Count: 124
Warnings/Disclaimer: I don’t have money to even pay court costs, so I’ll just say this belongs to Eric Kripke and be done.
Summary: Just the sound of the wheels meeting the asphalt over and over and over.

( The long Arizona highway stretched out before him like a grey ribbon, straight as an arrow and flatter than a penny on a railroad track. )

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neetha March 25 2008, 04:37:12 UTC

I dunno which it is. Sometimes I read it and say Sam and other times it's Dean. :)

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neetha March 25 2008, 03:12:21 UTC

Thanks friend!

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neetha March 25 2008, 04:36:31 UTC

Yay! I'm glad you liked that line, it was one of my favorites.

iamstealthyone March 25 2008, 04:31:51 UTC

Nicely done. Great imagery and details throughout, and I love the last line. :)

neetha March 25 2008, 04:36:02 UTC

Thanks! That's the line I was worried about. The others are real meaty and pretty, then that one just sits there, lol.

iamstealthyone March 25 2008, 04:38:02 UTC

I think it works great. A nice contrast to the other lines, and it conveys a lot about their relationship in just a few words.

joans23 March 25 2008, 05:33:33 UTC

I love this! The imagery just drives me wild!!

neetha March 25 2008, 17:28:32 UTC

Eee! Thanks, dear.