Chapter 15

[pierres_nuckfut]

Chapter 15...

Title: While You Loved Me
Author: Abs pierres_nuckfut
Chapter: 15
Pairing: P/D
Rating: PG-13
Genre: AU
Summary: Picture of Jeff and Pierre alternately played on his mind. Part of him felt bitter to see Pierre walked away last night, Pierre was right, David didn't love Jeff, he never did, but pity had taken over his emotion, so he'd rather choose

Comments

[lucy_punk]

Ehh first in writing n_n
I like me very much the chapter, and much makes me happy that Pierre and David are "friends" afresh. It gave me a bit of a sorrow as Dave I treat Pierre, but the things already estan arranging....

Very pretty history XD

But ... does pierre remain with Dave?:S

[pierres_nuckfut]

well, we'll see about it later on, thanks for reading :)

[beta_ny]

Great! Love this one as usual ;)
I'm so waiting for the next one

[pierres_nuckfut]

the next chapter is already up :)

thanks for still reading this fic :)

[pierres_nuckfut]

I'll try to write some P/D action on the future, but right now, we have to fix things between them first :)

thanks for reading :)

[j_r_90]

Love this story! I hope that everything will work out between Dave, Pierre and Jeff... Ohyeah, it's nothing, I know, but when you're talking about Jeff's eyes, you first say he has deep blue eyes, and the second time you say they are honey-tinted...But whatever, still a very good chapter!

[pierres_nuckfut]

oops, sorry, my mistake, thanks for pointing that out, I'll fix it later on

[guyonguyaction]

you know its great...i see P & D getting back together.....i know

[pierres_nuckfut]

we'll see about it later :)

[guyonguyaction]

i am starting to see the truth...i read chap 16 just now like 15 minutes ago.