Comments | piecesofalice: Fic: "My Twenty-One", for the vote

piecesofalice

Fic: "My Twenty-One", for the vote_petrelli Fic-a-Thon

Mar 13, 2007 20:35

Hooray for vote_petrelli Fic-a-thon day! Go and read all the amazingly charismatic and jaw twitchingly wonderful fic that I know is going to be posted (once all the Americans wake up).

Written for gossy16, for the vote_petrelli Fic-a-Thon.

Title: My Twenty-One
Author: piecesofalice
Fandom: Heroes, Nathan Petrelli
Rating: PG-ish
Disclaimer: Tim Kring's, not mine. I think.

( If you walk under a ladder, it's bad luck. )

nathan, fic, heroes

Comments 8

bantha_fodder March 13 2007, 11:26:41 UTC

I DON'T KNOW WHAT THIS MEANS.

I will tell you the truth, I only read it because I'm avoiding doing the dishes, and sulking that you didn't email me today EVEN THOUGH YOU WERE ONLINE. :o(

ONCE UPON A TIME THERE WAS A GIRL NAMED MISS PARKER, AND HER BROTHER BOBBY.

piecesofalice March 13 2007, 12:09:29 UTC

IF YOU WATCHED 'HEROES', THEN YOU WOULD, AND THEN I COULD WRITE THE PRETENDER X-OVER THAT'S BEEN EATING MY BRAIN ALONG WITH PRETENDBAT.

I just came on for a second to post the fic, then Liz needed the 'puter. I WAS AT WORK ALL DAY, THANX. And I sent you messages!

*dances off to watch her season two DVDs that turned up today yayayayayayay*

MSG ME AND TELL ME WHY SHE HAS A BROTHER NAMED BOBBY OMG TOO MUCH CAPS

acaciaonnastik March 13 2007, 17:27:43 UTC

She plays catch and kiss with him for months, her smile all teeth and promises. When he finally captures her, like the proverbial butterfly or something equally flowery, he proposes immediately in a bar, surrounded by their college mates and using a beer tap for a ring.

"Are you afraid to lose me, or something?" she laughs, from shock, from happiness.

He just smiles, because he doesn't want her to know the truth, even though she has just said it.

Oh holy hell. I can't even comment on the rest of the fic, because you've just captured Nathan and his motivations completely in that one bit. He's such a fear-motivated character, and...

...guh. I am in love.

adeline March 13 2007, 18:05:16 UTC

At the risk of being redundant: heeeeeeeee! ^^

"If a seagull craps on you, it's good luck."

sfdffjdsajkhjkl hkfdsahjkl!!!11! (I'm allowed, it's my birthday) That whole exchange is so, so Nathan-and-Peter, I can't... get over it, or put the glee into words.

I quoted a more comedic line, but don't think any of the rest fell on deaf--err, blind eyes. I just lack the brain function to properly comment on all the nuances and treasures in characterization.

In short, I love you.

*+mem* *resumes squeeing*

Heeee!

piecesofalice March 21 2007, 04:14:09 UTC

*DELAYED REACTION DUE TO STUPID CRAPPY RL*

It was your birthday! March babies unite! But I am glad you liked it, I stalked around your journal like a weirdo trying to get a sense of what you liked and...huh, I guess I did okay.

I WILL WRITE YOU THAT LINE IN A ZANY WAY, IF YOU WANT.

meli_64 March 15 2007, 07:00:20 UTC

Awesome!

jatam March 16 2007, 06:47:42 UTC

That is just so sweet, and beautiful, and perfect, and Made me cry. You NAILED Nathan perfectly!