Fic: "The Collarbone Press", Charlie and Dani (Life), PG

Oct 27, 2008 23:20

Man, I dunno what the hell this is. The last discharge before my writer's block breaks? A love song to Platonic Detective Partnerz? My clavicle fetish exposed? Whatever.

TITLE: The Collarbone Press
FANDOM: Life, Dani Reese and Charlie Crews
RATING: PG, for a bit of swearing.
DISCLAIMER: Really. Not mine, I promise.

Sometimes she forgets to breathe, and her chest seems to become heavier than she thinks she can handle. )

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grimorie October 27 2008, 12:51:15 UTC
Dammit. How do you do it? You kind of, sort of sold me on Reese and Tidwell because its screwed up and wrong and because Charlie's there and the only place of safety is each other. And... oh... those two with trust and truth and Charlie bringing her back to the world in the only way he can. And vice versa.

But its still not enough yet and the angst!

BTW, turned out they changed Tidwell's name to Kevin.

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jesshelga October 27 2008, 12:54:36 UTC
I have to agree with the above comment: you gave the Reese/Tidwell "relationship" the context it seems to be lacking in the show, and you raised up the Reese/Crews partnership until it could stand on mountains. Like Josh Groban.

The ending was phenomenal. As was the clavicle touching (a favorite thing of mine as well).

Tidwell's hair is greasy, y'all.

And that made me LOL.

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daygloparker October 27 2008, 15:42:12 UTC
There seems to be honesty in the air, and she doesn't like it.

I LOVE YOU.

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vonniek October 27 2008, 15:53:31 UTC
Well, if Dani/Tidwell plays out like this on screen, I could probably learn to dig it. (So listen up, writers!) Which is to say, good job!

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storydivagirl October 27 2008, 17:41:06 UTC
This was great. It fits so well with the show, but also adds something that we don't often get to see.

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