Oh my goodness, this was absolutely lovely! This felt so different than what I usually read because while it was kind of schmoopy and wonderful, it also really dug into Jesse's feelings and showed his neurosis. I read a lot of fics about him being adorably awkward but I haven't seen a lot about how his anxiety reads as somewhat disruptive to his love life, so it was neat to see that difference (as much as I love reading about adorable!awkward!Jesse). That's how I read it, anyway. :D
“I just disfigured Spiderman." made me lol so hard. Ughhh this is just wonderful. Thanks for writing! :)
I love writing neurotic!Jesse you don't even know. I find him so interesting and entertaining as a person/character because he's so clever but self-deprecating (I think, on purpose, to make others laugh) but also very sweet and vulnerable and charming. Gyuh. Anyway, thank you for reading! And I'm glad you liked that Spiderman line haha.
Why is it that every time I see a fic-summary I find interesting you’re behind it?? It hardly even surprises me anymore, but still excites me greatly! Gear up for another one of my lengthy comments.. ^^
It was his dream or something, to prance around in a skintight suit pretending he was a superhero, a white knight that saved people in burning buildings. I love Jesse’s complete inability to understand the appeal of being a superhero XD Like, it might as well have been ‘Andrew’s dream was to eat earthworms and get hit by cars’ ^^
Andrew showed up on a Tuesday, around lunchtime, with a potted cactus and a beanie. He wore the beanie with a hideous plaid shirt. He had a collection of them, it seemed. *squee* *too easily squee-ed* I love plaid shirts and Andrew’s collection (real life and the fact that you mentioned it) makes me giddy ^^ Also, aww’d at the fact that he brought a cactus XD
Andrew walked in, a lollipop dangling from the corner of his mouth. Andrew’s lips were wet and pink.O.O *phantom dick-twitch* Whyyyy am I so easy
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Andrew took out pack of cigarettes. He only smoked when he was tired, Jesse knew, or if he was cold, which Jesse also knew, but Jesse didn’t hold it against him like some people did.. I hate smoking, the smell makes me sick, I worry too much about the person’s health, and yet this scene completely made sense to me. Please don’t ever become a tobacco lobbyist, you are way too good at sweet talking me into being okat with things O.O
“Because,” Jesse said, shrugging one shoulder. He looked away, up at the stars which were hardly visible through the thick blanket of smog and the glare of city lights. “I'm thinking about kissing you,” Okay. My. Toes. Literally. Curled.
Sometimes, when Jesse was feeling bold, he would hook a leg around Andrew’s thigh and slither against him until his hips found a comfortable rhythm and Andrew groaned against his mouth, his face pinched in an unreadable expression, his hands shoved up under Jesse’s shirt. Is it hot in here? I feel like it’s hot all of the sudden.. *fans self* Seriously? White-hot!
You are my new favourite I think you know that already. Also ALSO, I should probably tone down the one-shoulder shrugs because what else is the other shoulder for, right? The smoking thing I read somewhere on tumblr, so it's either fanon or misinformation, and I honestly don't have a problem with it because it's a personal choice although I do, often times, worry about the person's health. Still, I get disappointed whenever people say they are turned off by actor a or b smoking irl. Again it's a personal choice that doesn't directly affect their acting or careers arghh /so many feelings
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I agree with smoking being a personal choice and I would never stop liking an actor because they smoked, but I don't think I could date someone who was a smoker. I'm allergic tot he smoke (it makes my eyes water and my throat closes up), plus the taste of kissing a smoker is the worst. I have friends who smoke at parties and while I worry about their health, I don't campaign against it. As long as they remember there's no smoking in my apartment ^^
That crack-fic sounds haaaah-LArious and if you ever do finish it and post it, I will be all over that comment-section, hahaha BTW, my first "full-length" TSN-fic is almost done and I don't think I've ever been this nervous about posting O.O
Haha, yes, I am allergic as well, somewhat, although most people I know/live with smoke, family and relatives included. WHAT IS MY LIFE. I used to go out with someone who was IDK straight-edge or something and was so against smoking and it got problematic because I had really good friends who smoked that I loved hanging out with and it was this constant judgmental speech over and over again grarr /TMI
I'm sure your fic will fare well. Good luck! And don't be nervous although I suppose that is normal. Then again I am nervous all the time. I hope to read it soon! :)
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“I just disfigured Spiderman." made me lol so hard. Ughhh this is just wonderful. Thanks for writing! :)
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It hardly even surprises me anymore, but still excites me greatly!
Gear up for another one of my lengthy comments.. ^^
It was his dream or something, to prance around in a skintight suit pretending he was a superhero, a white knight that saved people in burning buildings.
I love Jesse’s complete inability to understand the appeal of being a superhero XD
Like, it might as well have been ‘Andrew’s dream was to eat earthworms and get hit by cars’ ^^
Andrew showed up on a Tuesday, around lunchtime, with a potted cactus and a beanie. He wore the beanie with a hideous plaid shirt. He had a collection of them, it seemed.
*squee* *too easily squee-ed* I love plaid shirts and Andrew’s collection (real life and the fact that you mentioned it) makes me giddy ^^ Also, aww’d at the fact that he brought a cactus XD
Andrew walked in, a lollipop dangling from the corner of his mouth. Andrew’s lips were wet and pink.O.O *phantom dick-twitch* Whyyyy am I so easy ( ... )
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I hate smoking, the smell makes me sick, I worry too much about the person’s health, and yet this scene completely made sense to me.
Please don’t ever become a tobacco lobbyist, you are way too good at sweet talking me into being okat with things O.O
“Because,” Jesse said, shrugging one shoulder. He looked away, up at the stars which were hardly visible through the thick blanket of smog and the glare of city lights. “I'm thinking about kissing you,”
Okay. My. Toes. Literally. Curled.
Sometimes, when Jesse was feeling bold, he would hook a leg around Andrew’s thigh and slither against him until his hips found a comfortable rhythm and Andrew groaned against his mouth, his face pinched in an unreadable expression, his hands shoved up under Jesse’s shirt.
Is it hot in here? I feel like it’s hot all of the sudden.. *fans self* Seriously? White-hot!
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I have friends who smoke at parties and while I worry about their health, I don't campaign against it.
As long as they remember there's no smoking in my apartment ^^
That crack-fic sounds haaaah-LArious and if you ever do finish it and post it, I will be all over that comment-section, hahaha
BTW, my first "full-length" TSN-fic is almost done and I don't think I've ever been this nervous about posting O.O
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I'm sure your fic will fare well. Good luck! And don't be nervous although I suppose that is normal. Then again I am nervous all the time. I hope to read it soon! :)
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this fic made my heart jump with joy :3
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