Comments | pictash: fic: "liberated"

pictash

fic: "liberated"

Aug 08, 2009 14:37

Title: Liberated
Characters: Kiba, Hinata, Naruto
Word Count: 1,827
Rating: PG (Language)
Summary: Kiba doesn't know how good a friend he is. He probably never will.
Special Notes: Pairings dependent on perception.

( he wanted to believe the reason he was happy right now was because his friend had confessed her love to someone else, and not because she had moved on )

fanficz, naruto, kiba, hinata

Comments 6

oceansex August 8 2009, 21:05:47 UTC

I'm so totally in love with Naruto/Hinata and Kiba/Hinata, which is why fics like this tear my heart in two because she can only be one of the boys (unless you toss 'em all into a nice ol' OT3 and watch the fun). This was wonderful, and I loved Hinata after getting everything off her chest, and Kiba being protective and kind of awkward, and Naruto coming to talk to her like he should've done in the manga goddamnit.

Really, fantastic job. Definitely meming. :) <3

pictash August 8 2009, 21:10:36 UTC

I am SOOO gunning for an OT3.

Not just because it would be the hottest thing ever, but because....

it would be the hottest thing ever.

oceansex August 8 2009, 21:14:26 UTC

Word. Just thinking of the potential for hotness is mindblowing. *_*

couleurmonvie August 9 2009, 04:06:04 UTC

asfasdfsdadffddf KibaHinaNaru is my OT3~ your fic was delightfully angsty which is one of the things i love about the three of them. plus it had Hinata being strong and liberated because of her confession, Kiba being protective of her (he believes it's just because they're bffs, but it's not :P), and Naruto acknowledging what Hinata's done and talking to her. and just... YES.

*mems*

hungrytiger11 August 9 2009, 14:46:21 UTC

I love this for the ...ambigiousness of it. Kiba could like Hinata, or he could just be wanting to see his friend happy and is worried she'll act stupid again (as we have all been there and done that with friends of our own). Hinata could be over Naruto- or she could just be relived that she finally said something. Naruto could be there to give her a chance or to say he's in love with his teammate. Heck, even Neji can get in on the ambigiousness! He's watching over her cause she's family he almost saw die- or she's the woman he' love's he almost saw die.

Love it. And no matter which way it goes, bursting with ships or without a one, it does not detract from the lovely word choice that set the mood and the feeling of caring and friendship in this.

gabzillaz August 10 2009, 04:44:07 UTC

This is lovely.

*ships NaruHinaKiba like crazy*