Hungry Like The Wolf [Ray/Josh]

[devilsduplicity]

HUNGRY LIKE THE WOLF;
Who: Ray/Josh
What: A response to this prompt on the beinghumankink meme. Ray has an especially domineering personality. Oh, and he thinks Josh is his mate. Written as a sort of companion piece to last night's episode.
When: During 1x04
Word Count: 2,300~
Warnings: R; language, dub(or non; just depends on how you look at it)-con, spoilers

Comments

[slothfulzel]

Running commentary commences... now:

I love how Josh thinks that Aidan doesn't know shit, because that's so fucking true. The way I see it (and the way you see it because we're awesome like that) is that vampires have that learned sense of self -- where they belong in the 'coven' or whatever -- but werewolves, well... they're wolves who are born with an innate sense of place. They know who and what they are in a way that only few other creatures do. This could be my love for wolves talking, but I love where you went with that and how you described it. It feels right.

"...disobedience is worse than death!" ♥ ♥

The dynamic of the wolf and human sides of Josh fighting within him is great, because 'Josh' may be awkward and clumsy, but I don't think he's just one to sit down and take it (like a man or otherwise), but the wolf is always there under the surface and he needs just like the human side of Josh.

... *O* The ending was woooonderful~

Sorry I got a bit carried away on the comment, but you just have that affect on me. <3

[devilsduplicity]

/covers face

Thanks so much, bb! Y'know, I started writing wolves when I was little? And I've never written a werewolf, so it was actually really fun making all those syllogisms.

I AM GLAD YOU LIKED THE ENDING. I was a bit worried with it, but figured I'd leave it off about where the show left it off.

I love you. <3

[slothfulzel]

You're so very welcome! And yeah, I remembered a few conversations that we've had when I started reading this -- we talked about how we first started writing wolves and such, this reminded me of my thoughts on the whole wolf hierarchy and the like. Which makes me happy~

/nods I liked how it coincided with the episode ending~

AND I LOVE YOU! ♥

[bexspn]

Omg I loved this!!! Josh so silently struggling and just giving in and not thinking he can turn to Aidan was so heartbreaking, but wonderfully written! And its true, Aidan was so absorbed in himself in this episode that he wouldn't even notice if something was going on with Josh. I loved this so much!

[devilsduplicity]

Aww, thank you! I'm really glad you liked Josh's plight! I felt so bad for him while writing it. ;; And yeah, Aidan was dealing with issues himself this episode, poor vampire. /pets him

Thanks for commenting!

[angel_gospel]

Wow... This is just wow! I love 'Being Human' so far, even though I've heard the BBC version is way better, and this is really good (although I'm shipping Aidan/Josh atm, but I can diverge, easy). I love the concept of the alpha, the submissive and being mated. Would you ever consider doing anything more with this? *Do want more*

[devilsduplicity]

Eee, thanks! I really have no idea if I'll be taking this any further, or where I'd go from here, but if inspiration strikes I certainly won't stop it. XD

[blackwolf1480]

Angst, love it! You have the ability to clearly show how the characters feel in your fic and stay in perfect character, as if the fic came straight from the show!

It ended on a sad note, which made me sad, but it's a good ending.

You're very talented :)