My Sweet Tooth

[pickles_pick]

Author: pickles_pick

Chapter: 1/?

Genre: Fluff

Pairing: Byou/Jin, hints of Kazuki/Manabu/Yuuto

Rating: G

Warnings: Uhm, maybe tooth decay but…maybe not.

Disclaimer: No, no, no and no.

Synopsis: A macaroon a day, keeps a smile on someone’s face…and maybe more.

Puffy, this is for you, as promised~~ ^^

Comments

[namlessliberty7]

[pickles_pick]

Thank you~!! I've always wanted to write a part where people mistake him for a woman. xDDD

I'm somewhat glad to that it turned out multi-chaptered, but I'm not good with it so I hope that you will enjoy the subsequent chapters that is to come. ^^

Once again thanks for reading! ^^

PS: Your Kazumana fics are awesome too, but I always forget to leave a comment so I'll do it asap. xDD;; My bad my bad.

[namlessliberty7]

[pickles_pick]

Hee hee~~ thanks~~ ^^

I'm pretty new too~~ fellow new SCREW writer high-five!! ^^

Yes, please go ahead! =DDD Its nice to meet a new friend~~~ ^u^/ I'll add you back too~! ^^

[enteuruha0815]

thats a really lovely beginning. I like the concept and I really want to read more of this.

[pickles_pick]

Thank you! ^^ I'm working on the subsequent chapters so keep a look out for it~~ ^^

[riyu_sama]

When I read the pairing of this fic, I was so hyped up (was nearly crying tears of joy) Because OTP and stuff *laughs*

But, this is quite an interesting actually. And really cute too, because of the fluff parts in it. It's nice the way you portrayed their personalities here; it had good bits of humour in them; which added lots of life and amusement to the story.

Also, the way where you don't suddenly jump scenes in too quickly was good too, and how you show/change to the other character's point of view was finely done as well.

I'm looking forward to the next chapters of this fanfic and also, thank you so much for sharing it! I hope you continue and I can't wait for chapter two already~ ^^

[pickles_pick]

*gives you tissues* Which OTP is it? ^^

Thank you! ^^ i had to rewrite some bits and pieces here so I'm glad that it turned out well~~

I'm working on the next few chapters now so please look forward to it~~ I'll try to get it up soon! ^^

Thanks for the comments and feedback! ^^

[riyu_sama]

Ah, it's ByouXJin *nods then, happily accepts the tissue* You rarely see any fanfics with Jin in it, so I almost rolled on the floor out of happiness *laughs*

Hai, the story is really good *nods* I'm already too excited for it *laughs* But, I'll wait patiently.. *hugs a fluffy pillow tightly*

And you're welcome! Writers need lots of encouragements and stuff to continue their stories *lol*

[pickles_pick]

Ahhh~~~ I have a friend who loves ByouJin too~ this fic was dedicated to her since I promised her a fic and all. xDD

Thank you! ^^ Please wait some more patiently! xDD I'll do my best. xDD

Thanks alot! Yes, writers do need lots of encouragement. It's nice to see people reading but it'll be nice if they left a comment so they know where to improve and such. x'DD

[k435y]

ooh, there will be more?! 8D

hilarious how the guys think manabu's a chick...& byou's wife... & byou doesn't even bother to correct them.. i would so love to see what happens when manabu goes down to the shop one day. XD

poor zuki... yuuto didn't have to be that...um...straightforward. lol.

yep, sounds like byou's smitten with the baker already. XD

i like byou & babu's relationship.. it's cute & endearing..

please update soon?

[pickles_pick]

I realized that there was no way to make this a oneshot, so a chaptered fic it was! ;))

Byou's a part-time troll in addition to being Bu's older brother. Besides, I've always wanted to write a fic in which someone thinks that Bu's a girl. xDD *sheepish*

Zuki needs a little straightening up sometimes. xDD Yay! I'm glad that Byou's starting attraction to Jin was obvious whew~

I'm working on the second chapter now, I hope to get it up soon~ look forward to it and thanks for reading and commenting! ^^

[pirate_mozart]

I like this a lot! I really think the bakery focus is interesting!

Ha ha, bad Byou, not correcting them when they think Manabu is a woman. He's gonna be mad about that later!

I hope you post more chapters soon! This one was really fun! ^^

[pickles_pick]

Thank you! ^^ The bakery idea came while I was craving chicken pie. xDD

Oh he will be mad~~ Manabu that is. x'DD

I hope to get the new chapter up soon, so do look forward to it~ ^^

Thanks for reading! ^^