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pickleminded07

This Vicious Cycle Chapter 15

May 25, 2007 15:24

Okay, I was too hung over coz of last night's party galore to wake up early this morning to post this so that readers from the either side of the world can enjoy it before getting some shut eye. Sorry about that.

FF.net seems to be functioning properly now since I could access it through my laptop. So YAY!

AND I have nothing more to say. I'm going ( Read more... )

fanfic, this vicious cycle, grey's anatomy, addison/derek

Comments 28

mcjillian May 25 2007, 15:59:30 UTC

Oh Addison. Wow, she really isnt making it easy for Derek to win her back. Not that he deserves easy. But still...wow

pickleminded07 May 26 2007, 13:12:38 UTC

Derek doesn't deserve easy. :)

ccke May 25 2007, 18:39:08 UTC

Wow... wonder how Derek is gonna react! :)

pickleminded07 May 26 2007, 13:13:41 UTC

Derek's reaction in the next chapter. Stay tuned! ;)

kedda May 25 2007, 20:45:34 UTC

hangovers.... I can relate... seriously.

So here is what I am thinking.

I'm not sure what they are suppose to do now. Cause there was nothing she could do to get Derek back... and so I am not really sure what Derek is suppose to do to get Addison back. Unless he gets in an accident too.

Could he maybe fake his own death?

pickleminded07 May 26 2007, 13:17:19 UTC

hangover is a bitch and a half. ;)

LOL. I don't trust Derek to fake his own death...with his show of stupidity he may just bite the dust for real.

salmon_scrubs May 25 2007, 21:38:17 UTC

Ooh, I can't wait to see how Derek reacts to this!! :)

pickleminded07 May 26 2007, 13:18:35 UTC

We'll see how he reacts in the next chapter. :)

still_might_be May 25 2007, 23:06:51 UTC

Oh, fabulous! I can't believe I forgot to comment the last time I marathoned this story (somewhere around 12 or 13?). Sorry about that.

I love the Power Female Trio. Their interaction makes me happy. And forget hugs and rainbows and flowery declarations: this chapter was the very definition of wish-fulfillment. I cheered out loud when I read that last scene. Beautifully executed.

I have a difficult time buying "repentant" Derek in stories, as a general rule, but your Derek is doing quite well. He's working hard to make it up to her, but I'm still able to picture PD playing him. That's a wonderful thing. Thanks for sharing!

CL/GG

(Hm, I think I might have been signed in as my alter-ego the last time I commented, but I'm too lazy to switch accounts right now.)

pickleminded07 May 26 2007, 13:26:31 UTC

Hey! No worries on leaving comment. Better late than never. :)

I love the Power Female Trio also! Too bad Shonda isolated Bailey away from the two on the show. And I'm glad to be of service in wish fulfillment. ;)

I actually have difficulties in writing a believable repentant Derek. And I do feel he still has a long way to go. The things I, or rather Addison, plan to put him through would probably break a lesser man.

But it would be worth it if it means having a happily ever after with Addison, right?

Thanks so much! :)