Fanfiction: Rules for Roommates, modern au, WIP (4/?)

[pickitup]

Title: Rules for Roommates - 4/?
Fandom: Merlin (Merlin/Arthur)
Rating: R now but will end up NC-17
Word count: 3.7k (15k so far)
Summary: Modern AU. Arthur works in publishing and is ashamed to tell anyone he's secretly editing erotica, and being bullied by one of his authors - the arrogant 'Lake Anders'. He's also just taken in a new roommate,

Comments

[hellusbellus]

Grinning so wide right now, haha. "Bit of a Sloaney fucker." Bahaha. Oh, Arthur. Falling hard and fast.

I enjoyed the Penis Monologues.

I enjoyed the cleaning and Merlin's constant talk about Percy (which I think tells us a lot about how Merlin is trying to feel and act in front of Arthur as well as the other way around).

I enjoy that you set up a little lie in that last bit -- "he said Gwyn". Hmmm. Interesting...

This installment was very funny and occasionally sexy and I just luuuuurved it. Also, I don't usually begin reading WIPs (my heart has been broken too often **sniff**), but you are updating like a champ, and the set-up for this story was just too sweet to resist.

Can't wait for the next chapter! :D

[pickitup]

Thanks, I'm so glad you're enjoying! I found the penis monologues an oddly appealing idea, ha ha.

[peacensafety]

This is still wonderful, like home made pie! I like them bein' all jealous of each other, and I really want to see what happens next! Can't wait for the next installment! Thank you for updating so quickly!

[pickitup]

Thanks! I am working away on the next part!

[kattale]

Awww. Percy is a bit of an ass. And MERLIN doth protest too much about how perfect his Percy is. I'm loving how the tension is building to an almost frantic state - although I won't turn down the leadup pairings either - Gwaine should be good for a bit of release of tension, and I wouldn't mind being a fly on the wall of Merlin's bedroom when Percy is being his "a bit dangerous" thing.

LOL... dreams of being buggered by a blacksmith. Hmmmm.

Lake's story is amusing me to no end. Swimming? Where did he pull that from? I love that he presents the exact scenario that gets Arthur revved up... if only he knew how much he was pushing his editor's buttons. :) I'm so giddy with every update. This story is so happymaking - and so much happens in each update, I feel like each chapter is like the best Christmas gift. :)

[pickitup]

Ah, great icon!

Thanks for a lovely comment :)

[ambrosiatea]

'I can see that,' Percy rumbled a laugh. 'I could snap him like a twig. Seems a nice guy, but a bit of a Sloaney fucker.'

And then Arthur decided that it really was true that eavesdroppers never heard anything good and stormed out of the house, vowing not to come back until he'd fucked whatever this thing he was feeling was right out of his system.

HAHAHAHAHA

I love Arthur's inner monologue! The more crazy he gets, the more I love him! Can't wait to read more! :D

[pickitup]

I have such a penchant for a put upon Arthur!

[winterstorrm]

Poor Arthur, the Sloaney fucker! Brilliant.

[pickitup]

Thanks!