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Dec 13, 2007 21:49


Title: Memories Are Made of This 1/2
Author: prv-3-13-15
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Veronica/Lamb, mentions of Booth/Brennan
Word Count: 2479
Spoilers: VM up through "Mars Bars".  After that, it deviates into my fantasy world.  No particular Bones spoilers.
Disclaimer: I own none of the characters (except the ones I made up).  Rob Thomas owns Veronica Mars ( Read more... )

fic, prv_3_13_15, nc-17

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monack December 14 2007, 07:34:26 UTC
*squeals in absolute happiness*. You've written a crossover. Of two of my favorite shows. And of my favorite under-the-radar pairing on Veronica Mars. In a brilliant way.

I don't know you, but I think I might love you. ;)

Looking forward to part 2 :)

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prv_3_13_15 December 14 2007, 07:42:44 UTC
Thanks. I don't know you either, but I think I might love you for reviewing.

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curi_o December 14 2007, 08:53:12 UTC
Hurrah! My (other and somewhat secret) favorite pairing gets an update! I'm really looking forward to the rest of this, and I have to say that Booth is a really awesome surprise.

And, hey, nice twist on canon. Very inspired.

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monimala December 14 2007, 12:10:46 UTC
When this started off with the floating "Came the husky whisper in his ear" and "her blue eyes shinning with mirth," I pretty much knew what I was in for. You probably needed to give this a once-over for those kinds of obvious errors before you posted.

There is a *lot* of use of extraneous detail like mountains and cities, Lamb's briefcase model, how things smell and people's eye colors, and yet no actual characterization, no depth or detail applying to *them*, and that made the story feel imbalanced. Plus, when we know that Lamb's childhood was rocky, endowing him with a magically awesome adopted family without *any* explanation also didn't track.

Feel free to post part two when you're finished, but please do remember to go over the typos and grammar issues. Thanks!

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devylish December 15 2007, 03:53:05 UTC
so loving this!

and it's the best of 2 worlds... Bones AND VM!

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katie_riddle December 29 2007, 01:06:21 UTC
I dont know much about Bones, but I absolutely love the story! Cant wait for part 2

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