Title: Memories Are Made of This 1/2
Author: prv-3-13-15
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Veronica/Lamb, mentions of Booth/Brennan
Word Count: 2479
Spoilers: VM up through "Mars Bars". After that, it deviates into my fantasy world. No particular Bones spoilers.
Disclaimer: I own none of the characters (except the ones I made up). Rob Thomas owns Veronica Mars
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I don't know you, but I think I might love you. ;)
Looking forward to part 2 :)
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And, hey, nice twist on canon. Very inspired.
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There is a *lot* of use of extraneous detail like mountains and cities, Lamb's briefcase model, how things smell and people's eye colors, and yet no actual characterization, no depth or detail applying to *them*, and that made the story feel imbalanced. Plus, when we know that Lamb's childhood was rocky, endowing him with a magically awesome adopted family without *any* explanation also didn't track.
Feel free to post part two when you're finished, but please do remember to go over the typos and grammar issues. Thanks!
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and it's the best of 2 worlds... Bones AND VM!
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