Fly Away (original fiction)

Mar 29, 2017 23:33

Title: Fly Away
Author: clarelondon
Fandom: Original fiction
Photo: Alone, by Ghaith AL Ajmi
Rating: PG. Reference to children in care.

Summary: When you don't have wings, you need a friend on the ground.

"My tea’s getting cold indoors.” Galen darted a gaze around the base of the tree, wondering how hard the ground was, this time of a cold winter morning. “ ( Read more... )

challenge 15, original, original fic

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catwalksalone March 30 2017, 05:20:43 UTC
Well, I just cried first thing in the morning, so there's that! That was tough to read, but as hopeful as it gets for kids like this. (Although I'm now worried about Galen because if he's 16 it's going to be out of care and into the big bad world any time soon.)

Thanks for sharing!

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clarelondon March 30 2017, 07:51:38 UTC
Awww, sorry for that :( :). But yes, it's definitely meant to be hopeful. And I suspect Paula and others won't let good-hearted Galen go out on his own. In fact, I *know* so, it's my story.... *smile*. Thanks so much for reading!

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foxrafer April 2 2017, 09:42:44 UTC
This is beautifully written, full of real emotion.

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clarelondon April 4 2017, 16:58:42 UTC
Thanks very much for your feedback! :)

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