food is not the enemy (original fic)

May 31, 2010 17:18

title: food is not the enemy
author: tsuki_no_bara
fandom: original
rating: pg-13
summary: in jordan's world, food is the enemy. and then she grows up and meets a boy who thinks differently.
notes: oh god, so late. this was actually finished on time. >.< note and prompt pic at the end. thanks to wrenlet for the title.

When Jordan was ten, her mother put her on a diet. )

original, challenge 8

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evil_little_dog May 31 2010, 22:39:49 UTC
This is a really delightful story.

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tsuki_no_bara June 1 2010, 00:59:18 UTC
thank you! :D

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thistle_dear May 31 2010, 23:14:24 UTC
I really, really liked this one.

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tsuki_no_bara June 1 2010, 01:00:03 UTC
why thank you. :D i wish it hadn't taken me three months to post it....

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garnet_words June 1 2010, 03:01:05 UTC
Aww, I really like this. And that pic is making me hungry. (For a second, I thought you were saying the pizza pic was nsfw!)

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tsuki_no_bara June 1 2010, 13:58:40 UTC
>>(For a second, I thought you were saying the pizza pic was nsfw!)<<

well, if you work in a seriously anti-pizza office, it could be.... :D and thank you, i'm glad you like!

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clarelondon June 1 2010, 13:02:27 UTC
That's really delightful! You painted such a full picture of her life on your word count. And maybe because I've always had up-n-down weight, I felt for her so deeply :). Thank you for making it a realistic, upbeat ending LOL.

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tsuki_no_bara June 1 2010, 14:03:28 UTC
no, thank you! i'm glad you liked it. :D chubby girls (and boys...) need love too! i'm a big believer in loving your body the shape it is, and that being healthy and happy is more important than being skinny. and that you should enjoy your food and not treat it like something that's out to get you. my mom is a little bit like jordan's mom, altho my sister seemed to inherit the always-on-a-diet thing more than i did, so i may or may not have stolen some stuff from life.... *ahem*

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embroiderama June 5 2010, 20:36:57 UTC
This is really sweet! And the pic you linked to really works for it!

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tsuki_no_bara June 6 2010, 04:11:32 UTC
thank you! (the official pizza pic or the entirely random couple pic?)

(one garcia deserves another. :D )

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embroiderama June 6 2010, 11:04:34 UTC
The random couple pic you linked to. :)

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