as per request....

[piccolomuse]

the poem i wrote in history

Comments

[ba1126]

I like it! Particularly "sweet deafening silence" and "infinite white". "melts" doesn't work for me. How about "fades"? or "disappears", or even "dissolves"?

[k1m6a]

yayy haha thank you!!

i like it. and i also like the "sweet deafening silence" part. haha i usually sleep during my history class. it's good that you do something productive...

sweet poem! thanks for posting it :D!