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Fill for prompt 002 and two others!

Nov 10, 2010 18:00

Title: Her Game. (Remi + Layton)
Word Count: 104 words.
Warning: Slight PG?
Written for spunkywulf: Remi treats Layton like a pup.

( Her Game. )

remi, parrot, puzzle 002, drabble, layton

Comments 8

chaichameleon November 11 2010, 14:42:01 UTC

LOL at bird fic, I named my parrot 'BOOOGERS'.

Even though we probably won't be getting the Specter's Flute until next year, I'm already warming up to Remi. ;)

squishytia November 12 2010, 04:02:24 UTC

BOOOGERS!!! Great name! I can think of so many things that Flora could find in her drink. SO MANY THINGS!

I love Remi! She seems so bold to me. I love the thought of her pushing the Professor's boundaries. ;)

spunkywulf November 11 2010, 16:16:37 UTC

Her Game: OH MY GOD HAWT.

Tea Bird: I actually laughed out loud for real on this one. Oh my GOD. FRIENDS FOREVER FRIENDS FOREVER

Stuck: ALSO OH MY GOD HAWT (or can totally become so).

I've never been a big fan-fic person (I think I've read maybe like.. a total of 5 in my entire lifetime on the internet) but if you keep writing dirty LaytonxRemi stuff that might have to change :D :D :D :D

I <3 THEM

MORE PLEEZ

squishytia November 12 2010, 03:57:45 UTC

I feel the same way about fan-fics!! I hardly ever read them, but ...I just can't resist writing sexiness between hot characters. I love it, love it, love it! :)

Thank you! ♥

spunkywulf November 12 2010, 15:50:01 UTC

The way you write the romantic/sexual tension between Layton and Remi is great! I love how forward she is, and how ... awkward he is in his attempts to remain "gentlemanly" :) You do a great job capturing the fun interaction in the two characters. If you ever do more LaytonxRemi, I'll definitely read; you've got a fan for your writing for those 2 for sure :)

If you ever decide to go forth with something further, it'd be fun to see a fic where she's all coming onto him like usual and he's resisting, but then he eventually gives in and reciprocates... and perhaps he's more than SHE can handle ;) BUT MAYBE THAT'S JUST MY SICK LITTLE MIND HAHAHAHAH

Fun stuff!

squishytia November 16 2010, 19:27:08 UTC

MAYBE YOUR SICK LITTLE MIND JUST MADE ME WANT TO WRITE OMG. Can I make that our prompt puzzle 003? Puzzle 003: Layton gives in.

HOT.

Thread 5

minako017 November 22 2010, 20:38:07 UTC

Her Game.
YES! <3

Tea Bird.
Lol!! XD This is actually a possible reality for me.

Stuck.
<3 <3 <3 <3
This is like a tiny snippet of something more awesome and possibly dirty. :D~