Comments | pica_scribit: The Power of Two, chapter 7, scene 1

pica_scribit

The Power of Two, chapter 7, scene 1

Oct 09, 2004 02:07

Right. I've got the first scene of chapter 7 written now. The twins go to meet with Ollivander about their proposed plan. Ollivander is as bloody difficult to write as Dumbledore! The pointing out of typos is appreciated. Anyway....

( Wands )

gen, au, fic: power of two, weasley twins

Comments 7

jptrumptone October 11 2004, 08:38:54 UTC

Good story! BTW, you forgot a bunch of quotation marks

pica_scribit October 11 2004, 08:53:35 UTC

Thanks! Actually, a lot of the "dialogue" between the twins is internal, so it should really be in italics, but I was just too tired when I posted this at 4:00 AM to bother with it. When it goes up on my webpage, it will be better, I promise!

katschakai October 11 2004, 10:01:44 UTC

Damn livejournal! I had written a good entry about how much I love this fic and lj munch it up and tells me I have to do it again!
Anyways: I love this fic. Its fun, sad and all things between. Many nice quotes. Like this one: “Don’t be such a Percy, George." I can't wait for more updates

pica_scribit October 11 2004, 10:19:25 UTC

Grrrr to LJ eating thought-out comments.

I am really glad you are liking this. I really am as well. I don't really give much thought to the canon twins, but I thought the ideas -- both of them sharing a body and of them being the ones to bring down the Evil -- were interesting, and I wanted to explore them. I would almost like to see this fic as a film, just so I could see the "twins" going along talking to themselves, and get people's reactions to them. I have done a tiny piece of fan art for this fic, but I am saving it for the end, since it's spoilerific.

Typos writehere October 11 2004, 12:23:00 UTC

You asked for typos, and there was a clump in the start of the section entering the Forbidden Forest

and to as
since they couldn’t “hunt the wild yew,” and Fred put it, after the sun had set in any case.

quickley to quickly
They quickley ducked around a large tree, and came around to peer past the trunk, watching the path carefully.

slipper to slippery
said Ginny distractedly. It was hard to tell if she was trying to unwrap herself from the troublesome, slipper fabric,

Re: Typos pica_scribit October 11 2004, 22:04:10 UTC

Thank you! I shall fix them for my next draft.

Chapter 7 blackenedquill October 12 2004, 16:55:40 UTC

I thought that you did an excellent job of moving the characters forward in the plotline, letting them grow, but keeping them within the actual confines of the characters' personality. I can't wait for the rest of it. (I already saw the comments amount the italics, I won't nag.) I also like the further development of characters that are not usually the focus. Okay, almost filled up my little space here, so shutting up. :)