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piano_man09
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Nov 06, 2006 17:21
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giraffe22
November 6 2006, 23:30:05 UTC
karl, i REALLY like this poem.... it's the best one you've ever done. i love it!!! except for the last four lines. sorry :P
it's your poem, so do what you like, but i think if i were to revise it, that's what i'd do.
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it's your poem, so do what you like, but i think if i were to revise it, that's what i'd do.
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