Gift Fic for
ryo_pyon Title: Crying charm
Pairing/Group: Kamenashi Kazuya/ Yamashita Tomohisa
Rating/Warnings: NC-17, containing smut
Summary: Kame still has the charm he loves most. He can’t throw it away, even though the memory is sad.
Note: Written for
ryo_pyon. I really hope you like it. I did my best with it, and I had much fun writing it.
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Crying charm )
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thanks for sharing
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I'm so sorry for the late comment. Thank you so much for writing this!!! I was hooked after reading the summary.
It was so cute how even after they broke up, Kame kept the charm that Pi had given him and it was evident that Kame was still very much in love with him.
I loved the flashback to happier times when they first met up at Ryo's party and when Pi told Kame that he was stupid and that he could have called him.
I liked seeing Kame's vulnerability first in his friendship with Pi and then when he didn't want to move in with him.
They had fought about living together, and Kame had made a mistake he regretted now. Pi wanted them to live together, but Kame wanted his own apartment. He wanted something he could go when he needed room for himself.
Both points of view were understandable but then the next sentence was so sad. And Pi had gotten it wrong. He had thought that Kame didn’t want him anymore - like he was telling him that their paths separated, but Kame didn’t want that. He just needed some more time to think about ( ... )
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I think its becoming one of my fave to read! lol
I like innocent Kame here a lot! He is so obvious! :D
Overall the story-line is amazing!
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