Thy Crimson Tears Make Me Thirst for More: part 6

[pi_ankh]

Time to update this sappyness again. Not high class literature, dropping a line would be nice

Comments

[fonulyn]

I really liked this. The image the first part creates is so happy, and I was smiling when I read it, I can so see the bright and sunny day with those two! It was like from some movie (and don't ask me why, but I have this really clear image of the woman, her face and hair and all!). It was really nice. And the second part rose a lump into my throat, it was sad and you created the mood nicely^^ Although the sound of zombies being slaughtered kinda flattens the mood XD

[pi_ankh]

I'm glad you liked it ^^ [Couldn't I use an even more worn-out reply? x)]
When I was writing these (ages ago) the idea of cornflowers popped to my mind and I rather liked it. I'm happy that I managed to create the image to you mind. [When I write I see the image in my head, but I can't really put it on words and I get frustrated...]

[I kind of liked the last line being bold x)]

[fonulyn]

Trust me, I KNOW how hard it is to make the image transfer from your mind to someone else's mind!

haha, yeah, go on and mock me for my ingenious html XD