Comments | phyncke: Fic: Chipping Away OFC/OMC John Connor Rating: PG

phyncke

Fic: Chipping Away OFC/OMC John Connor Rating: PG

Jun 14, 2010 15:11

Series: Nocturnes ( Read more... )

fan fic, fiction, john connor, terminator, fic, nocturnes

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phyncke June 14 2010, 22:47:40 UTC

Your icon is lovely. Really pretty.

I thought it was time they kicked it here and got into some action. I really enjoy writing this pair and their gradually evolving relationship. It is a fun place to visit, bleak as it is.

Thanks for reading! :)

stephmariemarsh June 15 2010, 05:36:01 UTC

very interesting.. I gotta say I laughed with she when he had mouth cockroaches. I was expecting guys to be surrounding her with drawn weapons LOL

phyncke June 15 2010, 05:47:43 UTC

He only said the word (roaches) silently to her. No real cockroaches. It is their own private word for the machines...the flying ones look like flying roaches. I think they also find the terminators so disgusting that they are like big cockroaches...etc.

Thanks for reading the story. It means a lot to me! Thanks for commenting!

aglarien1 June 16 2010, 02:33:12 UTC

Bat-shit insane. Love it. Another good one!

*hugs*

phyncke June 16 2010, 02:45:28 UTC

I had a lot of fun with the "vibrant" language in this one. :P Woo. I also thought it was time for an action scene and some danger.

Thanks for reading, darling. I am really glad you liked it.