Fic: Nocturnal Transmission OC, John Connor (Terminator Fandom)

[phyncke]

Title: Nocturnal Transmission
Author: phyncke
Character/Pairing: OFC, John Connor (none)
Rating: PG
Warnings: None
Summary: A resistance fighter listens to John Connor’s nightly broadcast as she falls asleep.
Disclaimer: Based on the Terminator movie verse started by James Cameron and in its latest iteration by McG (Salvation). No profit is made

Comments

[keiliss]

I thought this was a great idea when you told me about it, and you've made it work really well. Suits your writing style, too. Very nicely done.

*hugs*

[phyncke]

This was a quick write and edit. The idea was very clear to me though I did not know what was going to happen until I actually was writing the words. I really enjoyed this too. I think more are coming in this vein.

Thanks for your feedback. It was also weird writing with out my beta net. O.o But I did! :)

*hugs*

[keiliss]

Can always run short pieces past me, hon. I'm very slow with longer work right now but a triple drabble shouldn't take me much more than --- oh, two weeks *g*.

[phyncke]

I will take you up on that for sure. I feel better having someone give things a pass. You will get known in another fandom too. *tickle*

Thanks, darling. *huggles*

[red_lasbelin]

oh, I like the idea of this. Big fan of Terminator. Nightly broadcast - perfect! I can see him doing it, and lots of others listening in for hope. It really connected them all.

Good idea, good execution - quite enjoyed that.

*hugs*
Red

[phyncke]

That is just the idea I am trying to get across. That he is the focal point of hope along with some very practical information he sends too. I am so glad you liked this as my first exploration into a new fandom. It was a very clear idea and one I want to explore more, either with this character or others.

Thanks for reading and I LOVE that icon. He is Mr. Dreamy.

[aglarien1]

What a great idea. Now you have me wanting to know more about Chris, darn it. Lol.

*hugs*

[phyncke]

That is also the idea, that you want to know who she is and what she goes through everyday and where she lives and all that. I may have to work more with her and her situation.

Thanks for reading my little piece here, Agie. It opens up some things for me in a new area. *huggles*

[coverguy]

I was digging it until she started getting off on it =(

[phyncke]

Oh well. It was where it went. Glad you liked some of it. Thanks for reading.

[coverguy]

Oh, I wasn't criticizing: I just think it retracted itself from the atmosphere at that point. That could have been your intent from the get go (for all I know).

I'll be posting a snippet of a story I've been working on, so you'll have an opportunity to remark upon whatever you like XD

[phyncke]

Sure! I will think about this and may factor your comment into an edit. I have to see what I want to do with that. It is really a thoughts before sleep sort of thing and perhaps the sexual angle is not right there. I need a little distance on the piece to do that.

Got to see. And I am never insulted by concrit. Your comment was constructive. I really do welcome good thoughtful ideas. :)

I would love to read what you are writing.