Comments | phyncke: Fic: Pass the Peas, Please Galadriel (Artanis), Aegnor, (later) Celeborn Rated: G

phyncke

Fic: Pass the Peas, Please Galadriel (Artanis), Aegnor, (later) Celeborn Rated: G

Jan 12, 2009 16:49

Series: Cousins ( Read more... )

Comments 10

elfscribe5 January 13 2009, 04:25:59 UTC

It can be quite frustrating to be little and no one pays attention to you. Artanis shows something of the forceful character she'll later become. Enjoyed it.

phyncke January 13 2009, 05:25:31 UTC

I tried to get that across---a bit of what she would be later, that force to be reckoned with. Her brother was having none of that, but that is Aegnor...he is a cad.

Thanks so much for reading and for your comment. I appreciate both!

*huggles*

chaotic_binky January 13 2009, 04:36:23 UTC

Artanis is just too precious in this lovely, sweet story.

Hugs Binky xxx

phyncke January 13 2009, 05:27:37 UTC

She is so fun to write at that age. I might have more stories about her coming. I really do like writing her as a youngster. She is a force even then. I also enjoy the family aspect of the scenes.

Thank you for reading, darling and for your comment!

*huggles*

keiliss January 17 2009, 17:15:49 UTC

I like the way you get the end to mirror the beginning - very effective:) I think your writing has grown a lot stronger, you show more confidence in this ficcie. I do wonder how any parent could fail to notice their son hasn't touched his food and is hypnotized by the candlelight, but in general the Finweans seem to be strange people, lol. Nice work, dear.

phyncke January 17 2009, 17:31:23 UTC

I wonder if she figured he would get to it eventually, being Aegnor and all. He was his own little elf, you know. Perhaps he was moving food around the plate. I did not detail enough there maybe.

This story stewed a bit and simmered for a long time.

Thank you for the compliment on my writing. I really appreciate that. It means alot coming from you. :) Thank you for the comment and for reading the story.

sylc June 12 2009, 08:00:46 UTC

Oh, this is lovely. I really enjoyed reading this story. It tied together so well at the end. Thanks for an enjoyable read.

phyncke June 12 2009, 16:02:40 UTC

Yes, I wanted that to come full circle and of course it is really about peas. I love them. :) He he he.

Thank you for reading and commenting! *hugs*

blslarner September 20 2009, 19:01:56 UTC

Cute!

phyncke September 20 2009, 19:40:22 UTC

Thanks for reading. Galadriel cannot be surpressed. :)